I wanted to offer out help for anyone looking for someone to proof read their stories.
I will read unpublished OR published stories, I will only read up to 3 chapters though.
I will provide both grammar and spelling checks, coding issues, layer issues, overlay issues and writing advice.
Please note I do work full time so I will do my best to get to stories quickly but sometimes I may be delayed. I would also appreciate a reply once I’ve helped as I find it quite rude when I spend time proof reading someones story to never receive a reply.
I will be honest about your story, I won’t be rude or mean but I will tell my honest opinions on it.
This service is completely free! If you would be so kind as to read my story in exchange that would be super appreciated though (They Walk Among Us by Rubae_)
Hi! Here’s my story. I think I’m alright with grammar, spelling and coding but if there are any errors let me know. I’m more looking for an overall review, like how I can make it more engaging (according to Episode Interactive, only 30% of people who start episode 1 actually finish it.). Or how coherent the plot is, like whether you can follow along with it.
My story
Title: The Fourth Wall
Author: The Button
Genre: Adventure
Episodes: 8
Status: More episodes coming soon
Available for: iPhone and iPad
Customization: Full CC
Description:
Alternate universes, time travel, an evil corporation out to get them; Lydia’s amnesia starts to fade when she wonders… ‘What is beyond the fourth wall?’
Hi! It would be awesome if you’d read my unpublished story and to return the favor, I’ll check out your story too. I would love to hear your opinion. I’m mostly worried about the plot.
Story title: (Not) Meant To be
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Episodes: 4 (for now)
Hey! Ill get started reading through on Monday, the first thing i noticed when I open it is that you say the episodes are quite long which immediately could be a put off as some people if they feel they dont have time to read super long episodes! Ill give you a full review on my thoughts on monday tho when ive read it
