Eli is about to go to sleep, when she gets a text from Anna and checks it
Anna: E?
Anna: Please respond…
Anna: I miss you Eli doesn’t reply
Anna: Alright… Goodbye.
Eli: What do you mean?!
Anna: Being without you hurts so much…
Anna: I can’t-
Real Life
Eli runs to Anna’s house into her room and sees Anna passed out with a bottle of pills next to her
This whole scene -
I have some advice. You can keep the pill thing but me - and a lot of other ppl - don’t want to talk about their problems. Especially if she has a lot - she must not want to tell Eli all about her problems.
Unless you’re aiming to make a story about a toxic relationship. Cause that’s really, really, REALLY toxic.