Scene Help (LL) OFFICE SCENE

can someone make this run more smoothly the end looks weird when they pass the coffee cup

scene
INT. OFFICE BOARDROOM - DAY
@LUCAS changes into Lucas_Office

music off
&zoom on 540 310 to 141% in 0
music music_attitudepop
@cut to zone 2
@zoom on 608 174 to 122% in 0
@add Sheet Paper White to LUCAS
@LUCAS spot 1.280 188 3 AND LUCAS faces left AND LUCAS is read_paper_neutral
@pause for a beat
sound door_knock
&speechbubble is 123 224 to 100% with tail_top_right
@remove Sheet Paper White from LUCAS
LUCAS (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Come in.
sound door_creak
&LUCAS is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
LUCAS
|bold|Ledgend|reset| MATE!)
&zoom on 270 299 to 119% in 1
@ARIANNA walks to spot 1.280 50 -38 in zone 2
@ARIANNA moves to layer 2
@ARIANNA faces right
@add Coffee Cup To Go to ARIANNA
ARIANNA (give_object_happy)
Morning Alpha I brought you coffee.
@LUCAS is take_object_neutral
@remove Coffee Cup To Go from ARIANNA
@add Coffee Cup To Go to LUCAS
@LUCAS is sip_cup_neutral

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&zoom on 270 299 to 119% in 1
@ARIANNA walks to spot 1.280 50 -38 in zone 2
&ARIANNA moves to layer 2
&ARIANNA faces right
@add Coffee Cup To Go to ARIANNA
&LUCAS starts take_object_neutral
ARIANNA (give_object_happy)
Morning Alpha I brought you coffee.
@remove Coffee Cup To Go from ARIANNA
@add Coffee Cup To Go to LUCAS
@LUCAS is sip_cup_neutral

Though I would recommend putting another animation for Arianna’s speech and giving the cup later, it’d look way better. Like:

&zoom on 270 299 to 119% in 1
@ARIANNA walks to spot 1.280 50 -38 in zone 2
&ARIANNA moves to layer 2
&ARIANNA faces right
@add Coffee Cup To Go to ARIANNA
ARIANNA (talk_cup_happy)
Morning Alpha I brought you coffee.
&LUCAS starts take_object_neutral and ARIANNA does it while give_object_neutral
@pause for 0.5
@remove Coffee Cup To Go from ARIANNA
@pause for 0.1
@add Coffee Cup To Go to LUCAS
@pause for 1.2
@LUCAS is sip_cup_neutral

Still doesn’t work

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