Scene needs fixing or made better please help

[LISAANNEMARIEE]

background & overlay

script
INT. JAIL BEDROOM - DAY with JAIL
@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 0
@overlay 4773250615934976_JAIL shifts to -259 -1
@overlay 4773250615934976_JAIL scales to 1.000 1.000
@overlay 4773250615934976_JAIL to layer 3
@AMELIA spot 0.254 218 495 in zone 1 and AMELIA is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop
@bad_guy spot 0.533 243 337 in zone 1 and bad_guy is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@JUSTIN spot 0.731 45 183 in zone 1 and JUSTIN faces right
@JUSTIN spot 0.731 45 183 in zone 1 and JUSTIN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@AMELIA spot 0.254 182 490 in zone 1 and AMELIA is standup_neutral
@JUSTIN spot 0.731 45 183 in zone 1 and JUSTIN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@bad_guy spot 0.533 243 337 in zone 1 and bad_guy is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@speechbubble is 247 392 to 87% with tail_bottom_left
@zoom on 164 399 to 205% in 0
AMELIA (idle_exhausted_cramp_loop)
(Where am I?)

@AMELIA spot 0.254 182 490 in zone 1 and AMELIA is callout_neutral
@speechbubble is 95 252 to 87% with tail_top_right
AMELIA (callout_neutral)
Hey where am i, who are you?
AMELIA (callout_neutral)
Let me out! Please! Please!
@AMELIA spot 0.254 182 490 in zone 1 and AMELIA is cry_sob_sad_loop
@AMELIA spot 0.254 182 490 in zone 1 and AMELIA is think_rubchin
@zoom on 164 399 to 311% in 0
@speechbubble is 100 381 to 87% with tail_bottom_right
AMELIA (think_rubchin)
(Let try and remember the last thing i can)
@transition fade out black 1

[l12beth]

Not sure what you mean, but I changed it up a bit. Also you don’t need to put the same spot direction every time the character does an action

INT. JAIL BEDROOM - DAY with JAIL to 2.65 -240 15 in zone 1 at layer 1
&zoom on 98 346 to 120% in 0
&AMELIA spot 0.223 226 499 in zone 1 at layer 0 and AMELIA is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop
&BADGUY spot 0.586 243 337 in zone 1 at layer 2 and BADGUY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
&JUSTIN spot 0.968 57 164 in zone 1 at layer 3 and JUSTIN faces right
@JUSTIN is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@zoom on 175 345 to 430% in 3.5
@AMELIA spot 0.223 180 495 in zone 1 AND AMELIA is standup_neutral
@speechbubble is 98 260 to 90% with tail_top_right
AMELIA (idle_exhausted_cramp_loop)
(Where am I?)
@speechbubble is 95 270 to 90% with tail_top_right
AMELIA (callout_neutral)
Hey, what is this? Who are you?
@zoom on 0 195 to 115% in 0 AND speechbubble is 124 305 to 90% with tail_top_right
AMELIA (scream_angry)
Let me out! Please! Please!
@pause for a beat
@AMELIA is cry_sob_sad_loop
@zoom on 183 345 to 700% in 0
@pause for 1.5
@AMELIA is idle_sad_loop
@speechbubble is 216 274 to 95% with tail_top_left
AMELIA (think_rubchin)
(Let me try and remember the last thing I can.)

@transition fade out black 1