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I need help ! i dont know why it says " Error unexpected choice params :20"

Here is my script !

readerMessage your about to do choices which determines if “your talking buisness” or if “your not thinking”

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

@ZAIN =0

choice [timed:20]
“Very very very far away so that i can only just see him”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Very very very far away so that i can only just see him
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Come on man ! you have to be far but close enough to hear him
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Next question
}
“Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy”
{
@ZAIN +1
readerMessage +1
@ZAIN is eyeroll_subtle
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Far enough so that he doesnt see me but close enough to hear this guy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Correct !

}
“…”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Cmon man i havent even said it too long ago
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to be far but close enough so that you hear him
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
What do you do if he gets suspicious of you ?

choice [timed:20]
“run away?”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Run away?
@AIDEN is sigh_disappointed
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
Seriously man, your going to get your self killed listen to me carefully
AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
You have to do anything normal to catch him offgaurd
Last question
}
“do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd”
{
@ZAIN is +1
readerMessage +1

@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Do anything to act normal to catch him offgaurd
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Good job man
Last question

}
“um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man ?”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
um…go up to him? I honestly dont know man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (sigh_disappointed)
Seriously that was common sense !

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok last question
}

@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Ok this is a matter of being smart
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Where would you put the micrphone?

choice [timed:20]
“underneath the table where he cant see it”
{
@ZAIN +1
readerMessage +1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
underneath the table where he cant see it
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yup !

}
“On his shoes”
{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On his shoes
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Your stupid
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Anywhere else but on them !
@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@pause for 3
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
What ? im just not feeling it

}
“On the gaurds…”{
@ZAIN -1
readerMessage -1
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
On the gaurds
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Bro ! are you stupid
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Chill old man
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Its anywhere else but on them !

}

if (ZAIN >1){

    NARRATOR

Good job ! you are | color:blue | talking buisness

@ZAIN is yawn_bored
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_neutral)
Yea good job man ! your ready
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Ye this sh*t is gonna be easy
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_explain)
Trust me man you dont wanna underestimate my job

@ZAIN is eyeroll_sarcastic

}else{

    NARRATOR

Come on ! you can do better ! | color:blue | you werent thinking
@speechbubble is 180 246 to 100% with tail_top_right
AIDEN (talk_apathetic)
Some one slap me !?

    AIDEN (talk_apathetic)

I hope you listened to what i told you or else this is the last time ill see you
@speechbubble is 134 234 to 100% with tail_top_left
ZAIN (talk_neutral)
Relax man i got it i heard ya the second time so dont worry

}

OK, wow that’s a lot of code :laughing: OK, first thing I notice right away, you need to have dialogue before a choice, so:

@ZAIN =0

AIDEN (talk_explain_neutral)
What is the distance between you and the man you are spying on ?

choice [timed:20]

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OH MA GAWD i cant believe i didnt notice ! let me see if it works !

YAAAASSS ty !

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Doing another quick scan:

Remove the word is here.
No problem, can go over: HOW TO: Simple Choices :blob_hearts:

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already fixed that ! but tysm :blush: :sparkles:

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