Script error help me please?

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This is the error:
Choices must follow dialog immideately, not a branch.

This is my script:

choice
“Give her attitude and let her know a piece of your mind”{

JASMINE (talk_apathetic)
I feel bad for your boyfriend because he’s stuck with you.
@DAISY starts react_angry_shakefists and WILLOW starts idle_armscrossed_angry_loop and MIA starts idle_cup_angry_loop
JASMINE (talk_whisper_unsure)
And nobody wants your weird ass boyfriend.
@DAISY starts idle_handsonhips_angry_loop
@JASMINE exits left and JASMINE starts walk_runway_loop
@pause for a beat
@DAISY is scream_angry
@DAISY faces right
DAISY (talk_angry)
She’s messing with the wrong girl!
@transition fade out black

}
“Don’t say a thing and stay out of the danger zone”{

JASMINE (talk_afraid)
Yeah yeah sure ill just get going.
@DAISY is listen_nod_happy_loop
@pause for a beat
@JASMINE exits left and JASMINE starts walk_worried_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black

}

English isn’t my first language so I don’t understand the error

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This means that the choice must go after a line of dialogue (either from the narrator or a character), not a command. For example:

        NARRATOR
    Text here.

choice
"One"{
#CODE FOR THAT CHOICE
}"Two"{
#CODE FOR THAT CHOICE
}

or

        CHARACTER (animation)
    Text here.

choice
"One"{
#CODE FOR THAT CHOICE
}"Two"{
#CODE FOR THAT CHOICE
}
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Thank you so much! It worked. :grin:

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