Script help please


#1

I have a script but they are to far and i did some zooming and then they are to big, i don’t understand.
THe zooming on faces i can do but why are they so far???

EXT. MOVIE THEATRE - NIGHT

@cut to zone 1

&NIELS spot 0.669 83 177 AND NIELS faces right AND ANNEKE is nod_loop
&ANNEKE spot 0.676 129 174 AND ANNEKE faces left AND NIELS is nod_loop

&ERIK spot 0.240 209 392

@pause for a beat

@ERIK walks to spot 0.651 177 188 in 7

    ERIK (talk_greet)
Hey, Anneke nice to see you here.

@ANNEKE faces right

Camera - Close Up {

@zoom on ANNEKE to 230% in 0

#}

    ANNEKE (talk_flirt)
Erik what a coincidence. Did you come to watch a movie also?

@zoom reset

Camera - Close Up {

@zoom on NIELS to 230% in 0

#}

@NIELS is cough
@zoom reset

    ERIK (talk_awkward)
Yes, the new "Saw"! Creepy!!!

    ANNEKE (talk_apathetic)
I bet, we went to see "once upon a time" I follow that a little bit, "SAW" I have never seen but "Annabel" I like too.

    ERIK (talk_excited)
It is the same genre.

@NIELS is cough
@ANNEKE faces left

    ANNEKE (talk_excited)
Oh ho stupid off me, I forgot to introduce you to my best mate.
Niels this is Erik, Erik this is Niels.

@ANNEKE faces right

Camera - Close Up {

@zoom on NIELS to 230% in 0

#}
NIELS (talk_greet)
Nice to meet you.
(not!)
@zoom reset

Camera - Close Up {

@zoom on ERIK to 230% in 0

#}

    ERIK (talk_greet)
Nice to meet you too.
(you can forget here.)

@zoom reset

    ANNEKE (talk_excited)
We were just going to a party.

Camera - Close Up {

@zoom on NIELS to 230% in 0

#}

    NIELS (talk_doubtful)
Were we?

@zoom reset

@ANNEKE faces left

    ANNEKE (talk_forward)
Yes, Sabine has sent all the details. Would you like to go with us?

@ANNEKE faces right
@NIELS is cough

    ERIK (talk_happy_agree)
In fact yes I just moved here it would be good to meet some new people.

    NIELS (idle_sad)
(shit)

    ANNEKE (talk_excited_point_fast)
Ok, lets go than.

@transition fade out black 3

they are just teletubies in front off the movies and when i directed them it was good.


#2

You might want to adjust it yourself on your phone/iPad.

I also noticed you kept on putting @zoom reset after every zoom. You don’t neccesarily need to do that. After all the zooms are done, you can put it at the end. But you can do it that way too. What ever is easiest for you! :grin: