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I would love a review! I’m always looking for ways to improve my stories!

Thank you! :slight_smile:

This is my story:

Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Author: Tldax913
Style: Ink
Genre: fantasy
Description: Kadence is a powerful essence with a troubled past. Will she be able to embrace her power in time to save her realm or will darkness consume her?
Link: HTTP://
Instagram: tldax913.episode
Thank you :slightly_smiling_face:

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Hey, @serenityanne.episode!

Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a review on my first story. Here are my story details:

Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode

Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! :blush::two_hearts:

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Here is my story
Title: Break Down My Walls
Genre: Action
Style: Ink
Description:You have your walls up. And no one ever comes in. But when you join a rebel gang, you feel attracted to the handsome leader. Can he melt your heart? Love, danger, lust awaits…
Thank you for doing this, I could always use feedback!

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Hi there!
I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at my new story that I just submitted for the writers contest!

Fantastical: Saving Hybrid

Author: Silkhydra

Description: Your life is changed forever on one fateful night when you are attacked by a ghoul. High school, sexy strangers, and jokester pixies? What could go wrong? (C.C & Multiple Romance!)

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Chapters published: 3 (ONGOING) :rofl:

Instagram: Silkhydra_episode

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Hey I would love a review from you.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.
Author: SS
Title: Shattered Souls
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: What happens when two shattered souls find each other? Will love prevail? +18

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Here is my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy
Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 5 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?
Link :


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I’d love to have a review on my story :slight_smile:

Fantastical: Nature’s caprices
Episodes: 3 (4 will be out this week)
Style: Ink
Extras: CC, choices matter, LGBT, several love interests
Description: Ana’s world is turning upside down when she finds out that she’s one of nature’s caprices - and if that isn’t enough, something seems to be off with her powers.

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Hi there! Nice to meet you ~
I’ll be really glad if you read my story!Dream_Job_Call_Me_If_You_Can_posterThumb_9SOJ1uRAP3

Name of story: 911: Call Me If You Can
Author: Lark Noah
Genre: Thriller
Style: Ink
Chapters: 13
“My name is Michael Clayton. And I was kidnapped.”
What will you do? Each choice matters. Save his life.
Or kill him.

My Instagram account: l.noah_episode

Thanks for reading :slight_smile:

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Hi! I’d love to receive your feedback on my story :slight_smile:
Title: "Fantastical: Behind The Rain"
Author: FieryTenderness
Style: Ink
Genre: Fantasy
Description: One day she appeared under the rain out of nowhere. Another day she dissolved in the rain just on his eyes. Will Tobias return his love and reveal the truth hidden behind the rain?

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That’s a really kind thing of you to do! I’d love feedback on how my story’s going!

Story name: Fantastical: Ai
Description: Escaping from Lucifer’s clutches, Ai seeks help from the angels. Being brought to earth by the queen for protection, she lands in Anna’s house, who wanted nothing to do with her.
Style: Ink

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Hi, @serenityanne.episode!

Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!

If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. It has 4 different endings and it is really animated! I promise, the plot will also keep you hooked :blush:

Here is the video trailer I made so that you can get a better idea what the story is about:

My story details:

Name of story: Fantastical: Black Shadow
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3
Summary of story: Having women on board is considered bad luck? Well, as the most wanted pirate captain, you’ll certainly bring the worst luck to anyone who dares cross your path. CC, choices matter
Link to story:

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Thank you for this opportunity to post my story!! It’s my first story that I’ve spent weeks on so please be kind :fairy: I’ll be sure to check out yours too!! :mermaid:
Author: Starfire
Story Title: The Gate
Genre: Fantasy
Description One gate separating two worlds. One side for the human race and the other for the supernatural. Play as the triplets to discover they grew up on the wrong side of The Gate. {CC}
Instagram: starfire.episode

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I’d appreciate some feedback on mine whenever possible.

Title: Fantastical: The Deathless.
Author: Alvar M.
Style: Limelight
Subgenre: Urban fantasy
Chapters: 3 (ongoing)
Description: Iason is an alchemist with many secrets. When he saves someone by breaking a two-thousand-year-old agreement, will those secrets lead to ruin? [LL, Male MC]

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Story name: Crossed Paths
Author name: Dreamer
Also, that’s so good of you - thanks for supporting the community :heart:

If you could review a few episodes (from 1 to 4 or less :smile:) - 5 is going through editing (half done) that would be great but up to you. Again thanks :heart:

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Hi!! @serenityanne.episode
Thank you for creating this thread…:blush::blush:
In this story there is a special art scene…

My story details-

Name of story: Fantastical: Virtues of Destiny
Author: S.Dsana
Genre: Fantasy
Episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Summary of story: “Evil is rising, truth is surpassing, but what will happen when they find out who they really are? Is this going to lead to love, hate, revenge or magical encounter.”
Choices Matter.
Link to story:
Instagram: @princesssana_sa

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Title: Perfect secrets
Author: KM
Genre: Drama/romance
Episodes: 18 (ongoing)
Descriprion: Drama, secrets and heartbreak. Lily thought she’d finally escaped it all after meeting sexy celebrity Derek. But will she ever be able to escape her past?


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Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could read and review my story.

Title: Life Without Jennifer
Author: Mia
Description: An accident has Jennifer torn from the world. Her loved ones are now left to learn how to live without her.
Story Link:
Instagram: @miawritesepisode

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Title: Fantastical: A Fight for Love
Author: Ashsmashum
Style: Limelight
Description: Follow Raven and Tilian through the twists and turns of several magical worlds as they fight their way back home.
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)

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I follow @episode.axiom lol , and you :joy::joy: