Hi! I’ve just started writing my first story on episode and could really use some help! I’ve only written 6 episodes so far and I’m worried about my storyline. I could really use some good feedback. If you guys wouldn’t mind reading my story and telling me what I could do better or if the story is moving too slow/fast that would be amazing!!! And PLEASE if you do give me feedback BE BRUTALLY HONEST. I actually want to improve my writing because I have no idea what I’m doing.
Written in Ink
Name: The Kingdoms
Author: Peached Pie
P.S. I’m sorry about the cover picture, I’m still waiting for episode to approve my cover art.