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Sorry I took so long, guys. Here’s part 3. Might be longer than the last two. Enjoy.

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Summary

And that’s part 3. I’ll be back for part 4 soon.
(My grammar and punctuations were a mess :clown_face:)

Plot wise, it seems intriguing :eyes: The start of the scene in the jungle actually looks promising.

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Thanks. I might revamp the whole thing. My grammar and punctuations are all over the place lol.

I’m also intrigued by the plot! Nice plant overlay, too! I didn’t notice it for awhile because of how well it blend in.

Oh, I didn’t put it there. It was part of the background.

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Part 4 is out. Too lazy to take screenshots so here’s the coding.

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
sound airplane_takeoff
NARRATOR
And so, the Stewards boarded the plane and flew to New York, U.S.
Their mother explained everything to Conner once they’ve boarded.
It’s a lot to take in for him since his father was taken away.
But now he finally understood the situation and will keep it a secret.
They landed in New York and lived their lives as normal people.
But will still remember the man who were with them.
Forward to 28 years, Conner is married and has 3 children. 2 girls and 1 boy.
Grayson is in university and got his Bachelors Degree and still single.
Diane Stewards works as a Fashion Designer for both women and men.

music off
NARRATOR
Things were going very well for them…
… until Conner developed cancer.

music music_darkkeys
NARRATOR
His wife and children along with his brother Grayson and his mother were all at the hospital with him.
It was a very sad and tragic moment for them, seeing him on his death bed.
They said their goodbyes while his son stayed behind.
Conner decides to give his an early birthday present.
It was his father’s/grandfather’s adventures satchel.
Conner told his son all about it and even told him the most important parts.
He said: ‘At the age of 16, that’s when a new change starts.’
‘You will eventually feel different as soon as you turn 16.’
‘And when the right time comes, you’ll be our righteous saviour.’
‘To all of us.’
‘I left you a present that only you must take care of.’
‘I must go now, my son. And remember, don’t open it until your 16th birthday.’
‘And don’t let any enemy of yours get a hold on it.’
‘Promise me, son.’
Conner had his last breath and passed away.
It was devastating for the family to see him like that, even when his son is right with him.
Conner’s son was confused by what he said, but he’ll understand it all , eventually.
And now onto the present day.
As this is where our story begins…

@transition fade out white 1.8

music off

EXT. PHILLY SKYLINE - DAY
@transition fade in white 1.8
@pause for 1.5

    NARRATOR
|bold| New York - Present day
Life here in New York is pretty great.
And been treating me and my family the greatest and even the most boring life here ever in all my years.
But sometimes, we're always wishing that someone would spend the life here with us in New York.
My dad, Conner Stewards.
It's been so long since my dad passed.
It really is heartbreaking for all of us.

@transition fade out white 1.8

EXT. DUTCH COLONIAL HOME - DAY
@pause for 1.5
@pan to zone 2
@pan to zone 1
@transition fade out white 1.8

INT. BEDROOM POSTERWALL - DAY
&ADRIAN spot 0.951 94 392 in zone 2 AND ADRIAN faces left AND ADRIAN is lay_asleep_loop
@ADRIAN changes into ADRIAN_pjs

    NARRATOR
Especially on the biggest special day of my life.

@pause for 1.6
sound alarmclock_digitalbeep
@pause for 1.6

    ADRIAN
(UGH! Stupid alarm clock.)
(Why does school exist?)
(I know it's for education, but hey what else is new.)

&cut to zone 2
&zoom on 463 0 to 279% in 0
@ADRIAN spot 1.041 158 141 in zone 2 AND ADRIAN faces left AND ADRIAN is stand_up
@ADRIAN is yawn_bored
@zoom on 463 438 to 279% in 2
@pause for 1.6

    ADRIAN
(What is life anymore?)

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
My name is Adrian Stewards Sanders.
Today is my birthday and I'm now 16.
Yay.
Okay, listen, I'm not big on birthdays so if you have complaints, you're welcome to leave.
And also my family and friends knows too so I'm not the only one.
Yay, my life is not so boring after all.

music music_islandvibes

    ADRIAN (eyeroll)
(Time for school, I guess.)

@zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 2

label wear_outfit

    ADRIAN (think_loop)
(What should I wear?)

choice (OUTFIT)
“Default” {

@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop
@ADRIAN changes into ADRIAN_default
@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop

if (TRIED_DEFAULT) {

} else {

    ADRIAN (talk_think)
I like this one.
It feels like me.

gain WEAR_DEFAULT
}

} “Comfortable” {

@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop
@ADRIAN changes into ADRIAN_comfortable
@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop

if (TRIED_COMFORTABLE) {

} else {

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
This feels comfortable.

gain WEAR_COMFORTABLE
}

} “Casual” {

@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop
@ADRIAN changes into ADRIAN_casual
@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop

if (TRIED_CASUAL) {

} else {

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
This one is okay, I guess.

gain WEAR_CASUAL
}
}

    ADRIAN (think_loop)
(Should I wear this?)

choice
“Of course” {

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
This is fine for now.

} “No, let me try again” {

    ADRIAN (eyeroll)
What a waste.

@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop
@ADRIAN changes into ADRIAN_pjs

goto wear_outfit
}

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
Alright, I'm all set. Time to go.

@ADRIAN walks to spot 1.041 160 141 in zone 1 AND ADRIAN faces left
@pause for 1.6

INT. KITCHEN CLASSIC LUXURY - DAY
&overlay TABLE ITALIAN create
&overlay TABLE ITALIAN to layer 3
&overlay TABLE ITALIAN opacity 1
&ELIZABETH spot 1.280 58 -107 in zone 2 AND ELIZABETH faces right AND ELIZABETH is eat_pizza
&ELIZABETH moves to layer 0
&MOM spot 0.892 233 192 in zone 1 AND MOM faces right AND MOM is tinker_loop_rear
&MOM moves to layer 0
&CHESLEY spot 0.960 148 22 in zone 2 AND CHESLEY faces left AND CHESLEY is eat_cupcake
&CHESLEY moves to layer 0
@pause for 1.8
@pan to zone 3
@ADRIAN enters from right to screen right AND ADRIAN faces left
&ADRIAN moves to layer 0

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
Good morning, ladies.

&cut to zone 2

    ELIZABETH (talk_happy_smile)
Morning, lil bro.
And happy birthday.

@CHESLEY faces right

    CHESLEY (talk_happy_agree)
Happy birthday, big bro.

&cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_happy_smile)
Good morning, son.
Happy birthday.

&cut to zone 3

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
Thanks, everyone. I appreciate the attention.

@ADRIAN walks to spot 1.280 255 -104 in zone 2 AND ADRIAN faces left
@ADRIAN is dustoff_loop
@pan to zone 2

    ADRIAN (talk_happy_smile)
And for remembering my birthday.

    ELIZABETH (talk_apathetic)
Of course we would remember. What? Did you think we would forget?

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
Meet the females of the house.
Mind you I'm the only male.

@zoom on 320 203 to 246% in 0

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
This is my older sister, Ellie.
Short for Elizabeth.
She's 19 and is in university.
She's still single and is looking for herself a man.
Honestly, I'd feel bad for him.

    NARRATOR (ELIZABETH)
Watch it, nerd.

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
Sure thing, you witch.

@zoom on 436 168 to 246% in 0

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
Moving on, this is my little sister, Chesley.
11 years old, almost done elementary and is an angel.
But if you know her longer than you've already have, then you would about her dark side.
She is no where an angel. She's a demon disguised as a human.
She will not hesitate to throw hands with someone.
Trust me, I know.
Because I was babysitting last time.
In the house.
Alone.
But she's still a kid and has so much to live so give her some love.

&cut to zone 1
&zoom on 268 371 to 246% in 0

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
And this is my mom, Annabella Sanders.
A proud 54 year old single mom and very independent.
She's also very sweet and kind.
But if you piss her off, she will fight you to the death.
Not really, but get the idea.
And that's the rest of my family.
There's still more people to introduce once we get further into the story.
Now back to where we were.

&cut to zone 2
@zoom reset

    ADRIAN (talk_neutral)
I honestly think that you'd just be on your phone and not care.

    ELIZABETH (talk_doubtful)
Not caring and forgetting are two different things, dumb*ss.

&cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_point_up_pretentious)
Elizabeth. Language.

&cut to zone 2
&ELIZABETH is eyeroll_subtle
@pause for 1.5

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_angry)
Did you roll your eyes on me, young lady?!

&cut to zone 2
&ELIZABETH faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_awkward)
No, ma'am.

&cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
That's what I thought.

@MOM is tinker_loop_rear
@cut to zone 2

    ELIZABETH (deepbreath)
(So scary.)

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
You see what I mean?
Even the person who I think is the scariest gets scared.

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
Wow. Mom has officially outdone you.
Mom - 1, Ellie - 0.

@ELIZABETH faces right

    ELIZABETH (eyeroll_subtle)
Shut up.

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
But not caring can lead to forgetting so there's a similarity.
And that's a fact.

    ELIZABETH (talk_doubtful)
That's not a fact. That's just stupid.

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
So are you. And yet you ended up in university.
So how did that happen?

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry)
What was that, squirt?

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
At least the pizza came in 2 seconds than your man did.
Oh wait, you don't have one.
Disappointing.

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry_defensive)
Okay, that's it! I'm gonna-

&cut to zone 1
&MOM spot 1.280 264 -70 in zone 1 AND MOM faces right

    MOM (arms_crossed_angry)
That's enough out of you.
    MOM (talk_point_up_pretentious)
And Adrian, stop roasting your sister.

&cut to zone 2

    ELIZABETH (talk_arms_crossed_angry)
Yeah, Adrian, stop roasting me.

    ADRIAN (talk_sad_timid)
But I was just having fun. Why so sensitive, Ellie?

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
I'm not sensitive.

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
You are, too.

@zoom on 326 229 to 344% in 0
&CHESLEY is shush AND CHESLEY faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Am not.

&zoom on 620 249 to 344% in 0
@CHESLEY faces right

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
Are too.

&zoom on 326 229 to 344% in 0
@CHESLEY faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry)
Am not.

&zoom on 620 249 to 344% in 0
@CHESLEY faces right

    ADRIAN (talk_think)
Are too.

&zoom on 436 168 to 246% in 0
@CHESLEY faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry_defensive)
Are not!

@CHESLEY faces right

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
Are too

@CHESLEY faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_angry_stubborn)
Are not!

@CHESLEY faces right

    ADRIAN (talk_arms_crossed)
Are too.

@CHESLEY faces left

    CHESLEY (idle_happy)
(I like this party.)

&cut to zone 1
@zoom reset

    MOM (scream)
ENOUGH!

&ELIZABETH faces left AND ELIZABETH is shush
&CHESLEY faces left AND CHESLEY is shush
&ADRIAN is flirt_fingersnap

    MOM (talk_angry_defensive)
So help me god! If you two fight one more, I will hesitate to cut a b*tch!
Understood?

@MOM is deepbreath
@cut to zone 2
@pause for 1.8

    ADRIAN
(Well damn.)

    ELIZABETH
(She's really scary.)

    CHESLEY
(Mommy said a curse word again.)

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_unsure)
Can we please talk about something else?
No more fights, please. Okay?

@cut to zone 2
&ADRIAN is deepbreath
&ELIZABETH is deepbreath
&CHESLEY is deepbreath
@pause for 1.7
&CHESLEY is nod_loop

    ELIZABETH (talk_happy_smile)
Sure thing, mom.

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
Okay, mom.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (deepbreath)
Thank you.
    MOM (talk_happy_smile)
Now, Adrian, I assume that you're now 16, right?

@cut to zone 2

    ADRIAN (talk_handsonhips)
And more handsome and better? Yes.

    ELIZABETH (idle_exhausted)
Oh my god...

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_think)
And have you been feeling anything strange at all?
No sudden change?

@cut to zone 2

    ADRIAN (talk_think)
No, not really. Besides, I just hit puberty when I was 8.

sound timpani_boing
@CHESLEY faces right AND CHESLEY is talk_repulsed

    ELIZABETH (disappointed)
(Don't say it out loud, you idiot.)

&ELIZABETH is deepbreath
&CHESLEY is talk_unsure

    ADRIAN (talk_think)
Why are you asking me these questions, mom?

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_unsure)
Nothing, dear. Just curious.

@cut to zone 2

    ADRIAN (think_loop)
(Weird.)

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_think)
By the way, since it's your 16th birthday, how about we hold a party for you?

@cut to zone 2
&ELIZABETH faces right
&CHESLEY faces right AND CHESLEY is admire

    ELIZABETH (talk_excited)
Yeah! That sounds exciting.
It will even host at your honor.
So what do you say?

&ADRIAN is think_loop

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
As I previously told you all, I'm too big on birthdays.
Especially mine.
But this is my family I'm talking about.
They'll get upset the moment I say no.
And that my sisters will attack me. Mostly Chesley.
So tiny, yet so mighty.
But anyways, I can't disappoint them and make them upset.
So I made my decision.

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
I'll think about it.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_happy_smile)
No worries. We won't rush you.
    MOM (talk_sad_timid)
Look at my boy. All grown up and a man.
Just like your father.
    MOM (talk_sad)
If only he was here to celebrate with us.

@cut to zone 2
&ELIZABETH is idle_sad
&CHESLEY is idle_sad
&ADRIAN is idle_sad
@pause for 1.7

    CHESLEY (talk_sad)
I miss dad.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_sad)
We all do, sweetheart.
    MOM (talk_happy_smile)
But we all must stay strong for him.
Okay?

@cut to zone 2
&CHESLEY faces left
&ELIZABETH is deepbreath
&ADRIAN is deepbreath

    CHESLEY (talk_unsure)
Yes, mommy.

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
I'm heading to school now.
Don't wanna be late.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_happy_smile)
Okay, then. Be safe.

@cut to zone 2

    ADRIAN (talk_shrug)
Alright.

@ADRIAN exits right
@pause for 1.5
sound door_slam
@pause for 1.5
@ELIZABETH faces left

    ELIZABETH (talk_unsure)
Do you think he's the one, mom?

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_sad)
I don't know yet, sweetheart. But only time will tell.
Right now, we just have to wait for it to happen.

@cut to zone 2

    ELIZABETH (talk_unsure)
Okay, mom.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_point_up_pretentious)
But right now, both of must go to school now.
But first, change your outfit, young lady.
It's too revealing.

@cut to zone 2

    ELIZABETH (talk_shrug)
Mom, I'm a young adult. I'm not a kid anymore.
So I can do and wear whatever I want.

@cut to zone 1

    MOM (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
Not while you're living under my roof.

@cut to zone 2

    MOM (talk_point_up_pretentious)
Now go change into something more appropriate.

&ELIZABETH is disappointed
&CHESLEY is laugh_giggle

    ELIZABETH
(What did I do to deserve this?)

music off
@pause for 1.6

EXT. DUTCH COLONIAL HOME - DAY
@pause for 1.4
@zoom on 320 110 to 190% in 2

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
To be quite honest with you, it feels really strange.

@ADRIAN spot 0.232 275 373 in zone 1 AND ADRIAN faces left AND ADRIAN is tinker_loop_rear

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
The aura that I felt back in the kitchen was off.

&ADRIAN faces left AND ADRIAN is talk_think

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
Mom asked me a couple of questions about sudden changes, which is weird because she never does.
Not in stress.
Something is not quite right.
I have a feeling that they might be involved in something that I don't know of.
What are they hiding from me?

&ADRIAN is talk_shrug
@pause for 1.6
&ADRIAN walks to spot 0.232 259 340 in zone 1 in 2.3 AND ADRIAN faces left
@pause for 2.5
&ADRIAN walks to spot 0.232 -25 201 in 3.2 AND ADRIAN faces left

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
And another to be honest about.
I don't know much about my father's past or anything at all about him.
I've been very close to dad for as long as I can remember.
But even he has some secrets that he's not telling me about.
I wonder what's going on here.

&zoom on 0 0 to 100% in 3

    NARRATOR (ADRIAN)
I don't know what is, but I can assure you I will get to the bottom of this.
But for now, I have another thing to say.
I remember when my dad told me on his deathbed about when I turn 16 and that things would start to change.
Well, here's how things turn unexpected in that very moment...
Summary

Part 5 coming soon with pictures.

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No, why’d Conner have to be killed off like that :sob:
I don’t want them to have a normal life! I want them to save the dad!!!

I appreciate your sacrifice.

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Is that Bruno Mars? :skull:

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    NARRATOR
So, your on a resort hotel and a lot other girls and a cute boy.
Your job is to try an get rid of the other girls, some of them have secrets you need to find out...

INT. EURO HOTEL ROOM FLIPPED - DAY

@YOU walks to screen right
@YOU faces left

    YOU (talking13_excited)

Eeeee!!

    YOU (talk_phone)

Wow! I'm here!

    YOU (talk)

Now I gotta change into something!

choice “athletic.” {

@YOU changes into ATHLETIC YOU

    YOU (check_nails)

I, look cute!

choice “should i change into something else? (Yes.)” {

@YOU changes into ENCHANTED YOU

    YOU (check_nails)

Cool!

} “no i look fine!” {

    YOU

I look fine.

}
} “ENCHANTED.” {

@YOU changes into ENCHANTED YOU

    YOU (check_nails)

Wow, I look cute!

choice “should i change? yes.” {

@YOU changes into ATHLETIC YOU

    YOU (check_nails)

Cool!

} “No i look fine.” {

    YOU

I look fine.

}

}
It’s like whenever I create a story it must have the, “I need to change before changing outfits”
Also the low self esteem :crazy_face: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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im having a blast reading these :sob:

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Yo, did everyone die? I think the cliches choked them out or something :skull:

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I have nothing good to share :sob:

I decided to go back and re read my old story I started doing a few years ago and omg… :skull: :skull:

Warning, it's cringe

(This is the love interest speaking)
I’m tough, ambitious, and I know exactly what I want. If that makes me cocky then okay…

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Lmaooo😂

This thread gave me LIFE. :rofl: I had an addiction, I read hundreds of posts- oop :face_with_hand_over_mouth:
Anyways here’s my first story written on the mobile app…


Yes, she is talking to a tree.

Still got that lippy though. We can’t have you looking completely barbaric. :lips:

Why she’s not wearing any pants? :woman_shrugging: I just really hope that was a directing/outfit mishap and not a choice.


She has many powers clearly, not sure in what context they all are.
She’s supposed to be a half-werewolf! :joy:

More cringey pics


I don’t know why everyone just seems to be bottom-half naked.


I didn’t go anywhere with that ‘weird looking animal’. Did I not know the names of any other animals?
I hope I made the brief on CRINGE. :crossed_fingers:
This was only episode one I’m afraid of where else I took this story.
This story is what brought me to the Episode Portal today, I thought ‘this story must be shared with the world!’ and tried to find out how to publish it.
This story was never published. You’re welcome. :joy:
EDIT I had to delete the first draft of this post because I realized it would probably get flagged because of the INK booty.

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I’m sick so I started re-reading this thread and it’s made being sick a little less miserable so thank you to everyone sharing lol

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Get well soon. :smiling_face:

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Thanks :slight_smile:

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Here are the next two episodes of my first story.
I feel in the next few episodes I was just trying my best to incorporate ‘everything good’ about Episode in 2018.


Werewolves and gangs! :white_check_mark:

High school :white_check_mark:

We know you don’t girl. ^

Oooh, the cringe. Anyone else remember these awkward ‘mate’ interactions? I think I hit the cringe overload with this one. :joy:


Now she has shrunk her mate. Still don’t understand her powers.



Mean girl. :white_check_mark: This insult though. :thinking:

Makeover. :white_check_mark:

Infamous sleazy rip-off. :white_check_mark: and mystery. :white_check_mark:
Don’t judge their jumpsuits okay. The mobile app was very limited on outfit choices, this was the closest I could get.
Oh, the time I spent on the first finding the wardrobe on the episode interactive portal. :star_struck:
This story has got everything. :joy:
I’m pretty sure if I published this in 2018 it would have been a hit. :sneezing_face: :rofl: :rofl:

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