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shyshy1014 · May 10, 2019, 5:07am

Haha thanks

Raybadem · May 10, 2019, 5:26am

Dang I never get rainbow writing

Bridi · May 10, 2019, 5:27am

lol

RAINBOW WRITING!!!!!

Raybadem · May 10, 2019, 5:28am

… Right

Bridi · May 10, 2019, 5:28am

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LINK!!!

Luio · May 10, 2019, 10:44am

New.

Redo, some tips from a group chat lol.

Old.

CelestialMoon · May 10, 2019, 10:45am

Just a tip: I think the eye should be more to the right and just a tiny bit deeper, because it‘s too close to the forehead

CholeBlack · May 10, 2019, 11:11am

ok wtf this is so pretty i cant even draw a normal outline

Zelda04 · May 10, 2019, 11:13am

Thanks, but I’m not exactly sure what you mean. The model in the reference I was using has a pretty small forehead, so if you meant the eyebrow & eye was too close to it, that’s just how her head is built.

CelestialMoon · May 10, 2019, 1:25pm

Idk how to explain, but it looks if the inner corner of the eye really touches the nosebridge and forehead in your picture. Did you used a photography or a drawn reference? The rest looks very good but the eye is very distracting to me. By moving it a little closer to the right side and a tiny amount lower, it would look more proportional. I just never have seen a person have their eyes so close to the nose and fore head. Sorry if I’m explaining bad. Im not home right now but if you are ok with it I would download it and edit it to show you what I mean.

Zelda04 · May 10, 2019, 1:33pm

Oh I see, no worries! Thanks for the tip!

CelestialMoon · May 10, 2019, 1:38pm

No problem! Don’t interpret it wrongly, but my teacher once said that when things look distracting it might be because of 1. Accentuation of colors or 2. Because it looks proportionally wrong. Normally you can flip your canvas horizontally in order to spot mistakes, but this makes only the most sense to 1/3 views, front views, etc.