Hello, i might be a little late but i was wondering if you would check out my story because i am seriously wondering what i am doing wrong with it and need some feedback on what could make it better because i see all these other authors who are on their first story with less chapters and more story reads then i have and i just don’t know what is wrong with my story. and i think i might need a fresh set of eye on it! please and thank you! and i understand if you don’t want to since i am late. here is the link to my story just in case you do have time and want to read it! http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6553552076079104
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