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Author: K.R.Younts

Episode 1 was quite short. I know you mentioned that but, the first episode is also you’re first impression on the readers. It would be nice if the episode 1 was longer because we didn’t get to meet many characters. Except Mom and Edith. I liked your approach on the story. It’s a pretty original story!

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Please review my story i have updated my first episode as per you guys.
Thank You

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5425545387311104

HI! Hope You’d notice my first story. Thank you <3 :smile: I’ll read yours as well

P.S. it is not really all wolves and vampires there’s more to it so stay tuned
Story: Unexpected You
Genre: Romance/Action/Fantasy
Author: Haneen
Description: A girl who thought her junior year would be normal as she expected to be. It turns out there are a lot of unexpected events happening in her life. Will she survive? Who is her man?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5037126225231872
Instagram: @haneen.episode

I’d like a quick review

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@CD_Erugo there’s not many characters to introduce until you get to about the 3rd episode. The main character is sheltered so theres not many people to introduce. But thank you for the feedback!!!

thank you so much!

**I loved her name, Oriana. It’s unique! I really like the taxi. It looked really cool. I also loved picture.
Also when you were talking about the last type of bar guests. You said " And the las type of bar guests. The Creep."
Did you mean last?

Here’s little confirmation

yeah, it should be last*
I never saw that mistake, lol.
Thank you for reading,
and name is quite important in the story, but that for later on -somewhere in season 2.
xoxo
Raniksa

Hey Everyone!
so this is my first story, and i would like to invite you all to check it out.:slight_smile:

Title- Hidden Secrets
Genre- Romance
description- Serena moved in to a new town, hoping to start a new life, and then she meets the intriguing Mr.Stark. Will they resist their attraction or will they fall into each others arms?
story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5150158950367232

I want to apologize if there’s any mistakes, because it’s my firts time writting in english.
But i would love some feedback. :smile:

Hello, this is my first story, all feedback is welcome. This is a short story about Megan Sinclair and her group of friends having a night out on the town. What could possible go wrong? Please checkout.
1.” To the Night”
2. Megan Beard
3. 6 episodes
4. Comedy
5. Ink
6. http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6348918723575808
Thanks :blush:
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Check out my story Dark and Dangerous!
Descriptions:
After Kylie leave her abusive ex-boyfriend, what happens when her path crosses the cold-hearted, ruthless, hot, gang leader, Jackson Cooper?

Link:

Yes, that’s her personality. She might become stronger in the future but I won’t make her the same as Yenn or Riley… :wink:
Terens is getting his bigger role in one of the next episodes. I’ve been planning on doing this for a longer time. :kissing_heart:

Here’s my story:
Title: H & V: Your SIlhouette
Author: anby.episode
Genre: Action/Fantasy/romance
Style: Ink
You live in Firea and you’re a part of elite Firean troops. You’re a Shade. Help your country, save your friends’ lives and find your love!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5060789914959872
Instagram: anby.episode
Hope you like it

Hello, I published my new story
If you read it I read yours :wink:
Author: Paula Sánchez-Cid
Story title: Mafia is my second name CC
Genre: Romance, Drama
Style: INK
Story description: This story is about a girl that suffer a lot, and didn’t believe in love, but Alex went into her life and she starts to feel happy and believe in love, but everything has problems…
Hope you like it :heart_eyes::kissing_heart::kissing_smiling_eyes:

Currently improving my story thus I would greatly appreciate a review. Of course in return I’ll do the same, thanks :blush:
Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: comedy
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories (feel free to follow me)
Episodes: 3
Questions: Is the plot interesting?
Are the directives good?
Are the characters explained properly
Is the genre more comical or romance?
Is the story understandable? Is it okay that the MC is a male rather than a female?
Does the story seem too mature for reader younger than 18? Does the cover art relate to the story? Is the title inappropriate?

Link
Art of Desire

Story Name: Love and hate: Freya
Author Name: Xayah
Genre: Romance
Description: Freya starts her student life in a small town called Myst. As beautiful as her life seems at first, she is facing a fierce challange. Will she succeed in overcoming it?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6339939558359040
Reveiw? (yes/no): If you want, sure, but required.
If you want a review, where? (public or pm): Either works.

Hello i’m Tasha this is my first story, I’m still getting used to episode so some feedback would be nice. Please read my story and I will read yours , here are the details.

Title- Twin Drama

Author Name- TashaLeanneRose

Genre- Drama

Story Description- Two teenage girls, who happen to be twins are in for a whole lot of drama…
The question is why?

Instagram - tasha_leanne_rose31299

Chapters- 10 (ongoing)

Style - Classic

Can you please read mine? It’s my first story and I could definitely use someone else’s opinion.
Title: Luxury Life
Author: Shumaya Begum
Art Style: Ink
Genre: Romance
Description: Follow four girls in their senior year of high school as they try to hide the biggest secret of their lives. (No Character Customisation)
Status: 3 Episodes (Ongoing)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4743293801070592

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