Share your stories here, I will give you feedback!


I haven’t read any stories for such a long time so I decided to start reading again. :slight_smile: Feel free to comment all the details of your story, I’ll read every genre and give you feedback.
Please provide at least the story title and the authors name. I also do read for read. :smiley:



i’d love to have some feedback! thank you so much! :two_hearts:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.


I’m changing my current one, so this will be my new one soon enough! :grin:

Chapters: 4 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:



I love feedback and honest opinions!

Confessions of a Female Jock
“It’s the first year of college and you’re already leading a double life! Academic beauty by day, MVP of the football team by night!”


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If you’re looking for some romance to read :slight_smile:

Story: Autumn Falls.
Author: Luna.
Genre: Romance.
Style: Ink.
Chapters: 15 (ongoing)
No CC, mature, art scenes.

As Autumn falls in love for the first time, her life begins to fall apart. As a web of dirty secrets & lies unravel, a dangerous connection between their families is discovered.


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I just finished reading the first episode of your story. I have to say that I’m really impressed, I loved the spot directing, the dialogues and the use of music and sounds! This episode was longer than most of the stories that I’ve read, but that was totally okay. There were also enough choices. :slight_smile: Maybe you could’ve add more music where Kai’s sister misses and make the main character walking rear when she opens the door instead of facing right haha, just a small thing that I’ve noticed. All in all I didn’t spot any other errors. Well done! Really suspenseful.



aaaaaaaaa thank you! i really appreciate your feedback! i’ll be sure to fix those things! :joy:

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Hi! Thank you for doing this! I hope you’ll feel like reviewing mine! :grin:

Here’s my story:

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 6


Thanks in advance,
Ava Josefine :dizzy:

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Thank you for this thread! I’d love if you could check out my story. :slightly_smiling_face::heartbeat:

Title: The End of Love
Author: kylie m.
Genre: Romance/Drama
Chapters: 3 (and actively updating!)
Style: INK
Description: For Reese and Levi, falling in love was a breeze. Falling out of love, however, is another story entirely.

Instagram: @kyliemstories


Thank you again! :star2:

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Hi :slight_smile:
Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Liyah
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 4 (more to come)
Summary: follow alana and her best friends on this crazy journey while they try to find their goal path and avoid bad behavior.
Style: Limelight


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Wow i love this thread, I’d love if you would be able to review my story.

Title: Triple Threat: The Life Of An Assassin
Authors: Sapp & Bhaddie
Genre: Romance/Drama
Episodes: only 1&2 are out (ongoing
Description: Your name is Athena King, once your ex comes back into your life things begin to take a swift turn and for the worse. You get a new “job” proposal, what will you do?
Style: Ink


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I would be interested in doing a r4r with you if you would like :heart:
Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED

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I have 5 stories. Here are my stories.

Title: Projection!
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Description: Harry Stevens is looking for his big break in the world of musical theatre. But what will it take to get there?

Title: Publicity Problems
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Drama
Description: Samantha Xanders struggles with her fame after receiving unwanted publicity. Can she overcome the challenges of stardom?

Title: Video Game Champion
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Action
Description: You are a gamer hoping to win the video game championship. Can you defeat your rival after a 5-year losing streak?

Title: Capture the Moment
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Comedy
Description: Takoda is a photographer who inspires to become freelance and expand his portfolio. Can he snapshot his way to success?

Title: Thespian Theatrical
Author: Karlon Artis
Genre: Romance
Description: Estefania Hermoso loves theatre and has a passion for it. But what happens when a girl she likes doesn’t have the same passion as her?

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Hi! Will love to get your hones opinion/feedback! :blush:

Tittle: Taken: Dead or Alive (INK)
Author: xoRoséxo
Instagram: xoroses.episode

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Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Author: Briana M.
Genre: Romance
# of Episodes: 21 (ongoing)
Style: Ink
Summary: It’s one thing to not have a man in your life, but it’s another thing to be in denial of love. Ashden, a young woman, will learn the importance of having a man in her life.
Instagram: @brianam.stories

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If you want to give it a shot, that’d would be greatly appreciated. It’s called “I Don’t Wanna Be In Love” and the author is Meghan, it has six chapters and ongoing. There’s full CC for you and your love interests (one female and one male) plus CC for a few extra characters. The description is “love is hard. When you realize you start to fall, you try and run. Let’s see how that ends for you.”

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Hey, thank you so much for creating this thread, I would love for you to give my story a read.:slight_smile:
Here’s the details to my story in case you want to check it out.

Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter



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I just finished with episode 1. That was really good! I loved how you used music and filters, and I noticed a few errors: Sometimes the characters were facing the wrong way when they walked rear and you could use the “&” command so the characters won’t pop in out of nowhere. :sweat_smile: I also suggest you to let the music fade out using for example „volume music 0 4000“. Maybe you could also add more choices? All in all I really liked it. Especially the beginning with the dream university :heart_eyes:. Well done!



Hey there, :unicorn:
-My story is called “Rosecroft Academy”
-My author name is AthenaRose
-The story uses INK and CC
-You can find me on Instagram to chat:
-Story link:
-Plot: A girl recently finds out she has supernatural gifts. Will she be able to handle college life while crossing paths with two mysterious men, one of whom might be her soulmate?

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Thanks Leli! Much appreciated! If you happen to read more, I appreciate more feedback or errors you note!

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Hey-ho, I’m also leaving my details here in the hope of some feedbacks. ^^

Story Title: Make Me Feel Alive
Author : JiangShi
Completion Status: 5 (More episodes to come)
Genres: Fantasy/Romance/Comedy
Story style : Limelight
Description : He has a gorgeous face, a hot body, and a shocking secret hidden behind his mesmerizing pair of almond-shaped eyes. And oh, dear Lord, he’s just moved next door!
Link : [ ]
My IG: @jiangshi.episode

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