Hi I am a new writer and would love it for anyone to read my story and give me feedback 
Title: It’s complicated
Description: Bryonie wants a happy life. A life she never got the chance of having. What will happen when everything goes tragically wrong? Will she get revenge and get her happy life?
Genre: Drama/Action/Comedy
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5903801203163136
It’s Complicated is a VERY good story. I love the story line and the whole idea of it. Only thing I would say for you was better punctuation. I noticed a lot of uncapitalized I’s that stick out like a sore thumb otherwise. It was really good.
OMG. Domestic Violence is PERFECT. The grammar and punctuation, the zooms, the story line! I’m head over heels for this story. You really put me in the shoes of the character.
Title of the story : Trail Of Tears
Name of the author : Cindy
Story genre : Drama/Romance
Description : A girl who goes through a lot in her life. Some days are good and some days are bad she wants to just be a normal girl that does not have to run away from her problems. CC
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5548954080247808
Style : Ink
Episodes : 15
Can you please PM me the feedback, thanks in advance.
Hi, I just published my new story!
Please check it out and tell me what you think about it 
Story Title: When The Heart Speaks
Description: You dated, but never been in love. When you unintentionally playing with their hearts, now it’s time to play your own game. Will your heart finally speaks to you? (LGBT&CC)
Number of Chapters out: 3
Genre: Romance/Drama/Comedy
Author: Bellarina CH
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5408388768464896
Style: Limelight
Features: Character customization, LGBT option, Multiple endings!
Please don’t hesitate to share your opinion about the story. You can mail me through episode or
you can follow my instagram for sneak peeks and updates too!
@bellarina.episode
Thank you!
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This is my story, and I’m really open for feedback!
Title: No-body
Author: Tuva
Genre: Romance
Style: Limelight
Description: You’re living the dream of a life… or? At least things is about to turn around! cough I mean oppside down. You didn’t really think life would get easier?
Episodes: 12
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5629087382110208
Instagram: Episode.Tuva
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I’m sorry! I’m a SUCKER for Fantasy!!! I LOVE IT. The whole idea. I especially loved the effects of her powers.
I would check yours, however you have an invalid link. Please leave a correct one and I’ll read yours as soon as possible.
You didn’t leave a link…
Forgive me for the inconvenience, but I will not be reading your story. I don’t mean to offend you, you mustn’t take this the wrong way but I’d prefer not to read a story including devils.
For your story I love the actual storyline in itself, however I did notice that you had a hint of profanity and I think you forgot your warning sign. That’s extremely important. I also noticed a few errors in grammar and punctuation. Overall I will be reading more.
Title: Human Doll
Author: Susu&Juju
Episodes 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Drama and Comedy
Style: INK
Plot Summary: The last thing you thought was to become the size of a doll. What’s worse is starting to live with your conceited obnoxious neighbour. Uh-Oh…
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5997265629609984
Read for Read: Yup.
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Thank you for reading!
I will go back and add the warning now that I know how to, When i first started writing episode I have no clue hahaa, and spelling is my weakness but I know it gets a lot better hahaha.
Glad you like my story, means a lot!
Hi there! I would love to hear what you think of my story!
Title: STAR POWER Fame Through My Eyes
Style: Limelight
Length: 6 episodes | on going
Genre: Drama
Description Secrets, scandals, and drama await Emma when she travels to NYC.
Author: Jane Vent
Thank you! I will go back and fix them up
Hi, sorry I think I missed a number on the link. This one should work. Thank you in advance. 
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I think that this story is PERFECTION. Everything is on point here from the punctuation to the details of what’s going on. Plus I love the story line I noticed that a lot with these story’s. Love Quest is AMAZING. 
You didn’t leave a link…
SO I have a current story…it’s ongoing but on hold for a bit cause I’m participating in the H&V contest…but it’d be great if you guys could read it and give me a bit of feedback on it…
Title: Dangerous Love
Author: DarkPrincess
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: A mafia leader on the run holds you captive. Can you keep your heart from being tangled up in his messed up world?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4945431087022080
More episodes on the way…thanks for reading…I hope you’ll like it…
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If I’m honest, I don’t really get the storyline. First we speak of dolls, then it turns into “The Bad Boy Next Door” I would like you to elaborate more on the doll thing for the first episode. The first one is supposed to be giving me basically a look at how this happened. I do hope you take my advice and are not led to believe I’m just being mean. These are my honest thoughts.
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