Title: 
SO UNREALISTIC
By: Nonnica Busten
Instagram: @nonnicauthor_episode
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 4 (3 new chapters per week)
Description: Megi is a smart girl who likes being in a control. But what happens when she starts losing it and all beacuse of a boy she despises?
NO GEM CHOICES other than support author
Hi everybody, I’m a new author on Episode and here is my first story so if you like drama and romance, this will be perfect story for your drama and romance needs.
Thank you all so much, it means a lot
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I hope you like it 
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The main characters are already celebs!
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“When fantasy and reality merge together to define who you are and make your soulmate an opposite version of you; you have to go against the odds to make it work.”
This story is about love, self discovery, pain, loss, betrayal, & elemental powers.
Story name: The Magical Stones
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5202804048789504
Episodes: 3
Story length when fully released: 16 (2 seasons)
Genre: Fantasy
Gem choices: mostly for outfits, but I made sure to include other pretty choices if you don’t wish to pay for the outfits.
Art: I made all the art myself
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Hi!! I’d love to recommend two of my stories below:
Title: FT: Sanctum
By: Naoba (IG: @naoba.writes)
Genre: Fantasy
Description: In this retelling of Robin Hood, Robin must juggle his love life, his duties as prince and his double life as the leader of an unruly gang of bandits while trying to stay alive in Sanctum!
Link to my story: Episode Writer Portal
Story Features:
- Male MC
- 1 Love interest
- Point system
- Full CC
- mini games
Cover:
Title: Never Trust an Andrew
By: Naoba (IG: @naoba.writes)
Genre: Drama
Description: A songwriter with an Andrew obsession is persuaded to accept a mysterious aunt’s invitation to spend the summer at an exclusive island that’s bent on breaking her & her friends down
Story Features:
- Female MC
- 2 Love interests
- Point system
- Limited CC
- mini games/ create your own songs
Link to my story: Episode Writer Portal
Cover:
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Heres my story
Title: Pride Love
Genre: LGBTQ+ 
Episodes: 4
Storylink: Episode Writer Portal
My Instagram is @waxeye.episode
Up for a R4R 
Up for a G4G 
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Bump!!
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE READ OR GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS ON HOW TO MAKE IT BETTER!!!
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Description: One minute I was homeless and struggling. Next, both our worlds exploded. Then, unknowingly changed right in front of us. I’ve got a lot more to deal with than just him… right?
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TY for this thread
TITLE: FOR BETTER OR WORSE
EPISODES : 3 i just published it
GENRE : DRAMA
CC
LL
COVERS
Description: Your life is already complicated and you hear the most shocking thing in your life how will you cope… Will it be for better or for worse???
TY
I can do R4R
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Sorry it took so long to read. I got lazy. 
Twisted Hearts
Beautiful story; some things to talk about though.
Firstly, I have mixed feelings about the filter used throughout the story. Personally, I’m not a fan of it, and I’m uncertain about its relevance. It might be worth considering whether it adds value to the overall reading experience.
One recurring issue I noticed is that after her husband, Colton’s death, Scarlet repeatedly says, “I’m scared.” While this conveys her fear, I believe using alternative expressions or exploring different emotions could add depth to her character. For instance, phrases like “I’m filled with fear,” “I’m trembling,” or “I’m petrified” could be considered to vary her reactions and in cases of narrations, “My nerves were on high alert”, “My heart pounded with anxiety”, “Fear gripped my every thought.” etc.
In chapter 5, Haydon’s thoughts mostly felt cliché, and it seemed like there was an excessive amount of information being dumped. It might be better to find a balance between sharing important details and letting his thoughts flow more naturally.
During the party scene (when Lexi walked up to interrupt Hayden), there was a small mistake where Lexi seemed to be walking and then suddenly started gliding. This may have been an unintentional error or a timing issue.
In another scene at the office, Scarlet was positioned behind the overlay on the door that said “204.” It seemed like a small mistake in the visuals that could be fixed.
On a positive note, I genuinely admired Scarlet’s character and her strength throughout the story. Losing a loved one is devastating, and her ability to find herself and take bold steps forward was inspiring. This aspect of her character resonated with me and kept me engaged.
The directing in general was very good, although there were times when the pace felt a bit slow. However, it didn’t ruin my overall enjoyment of the story.
Finally, I’m curious to know if the choices made by the characters have an impact on the story. Do the choices matter and affect how the plot unfolds?
In conclusion, it is an enjoyable book with strong characterization and effective directing. I look forward to reading more and discovering how the story unfolds. Keep writing! 
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DANGER
I read your story “Danger” and wanted to share my thoughts and feedback with you. Overall, it was an interesting story with some standout elements. However, there were a few areas where I felt improvements could be made to enhance the reading experience. I hope you find this feedback helpful in further refining your story. Let’s delve into the points I wanted to address.
I also want to mention that it would have been helpful if you had provided a link to your story. I had to search for it myself, which took some extra effort.
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Character Appearance:
I must commend you on the default appearance of the characters. Silas and Destiny were visually appealing, and I appreciated not having to spend too much time customizing them. They were already a perfect fit for my personal taste.
In episode 4 though, I noticed an unexpected change in Destiny’s hair color, which reverted back to red. I wasn’t sure if it was intentional or if there was a specific reason behind it.
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Height Difference + Gliding Issues:
There was a noticeable height difference between Silas and the females, especially when Meghan was on heels and was still a lot shorter than him. It seemed a bit exaggerated and could be adjusted for a more realistic portrayal.
Additionally, during certain scenes, I noticed some technical issues. Meghan appeared to walk for a short distance before gliding into the kitchen (ep.1). This same gliding effect occurred in episode 4 when Destiny and London were in the hallway.
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Episode Length + Pacing:
The first episode served as a great introduction to the characters, and I found it engaging and well-paced. However, in the subsequent episodes, particularly episode 2, the story became slower. The pauses and character movements were longer than necessary, which made the story feel dragged out. Consider tightening the pacing to maintain reader engagement.
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Balancing Information + Show, Not Tell:
In the story, you did a good job of giving us information about the characters and their world. However, sometimes there’s too much telling and it takes away from the immersive experience. Instead of just telling us everything, you could find clever ways to include important details in the scenes. This would make the story more vivid and engaging for the readers.
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Reader Messages + Character Emotional Depth:
I personally found the frequent reader messages from the author (you) to be distracting and often stating the obvious. It would be better to minimize these interruptions and allow the story to unfold more naturally. Additionally, I struggled to connect with the characters on an emotional level. This made it easier for me to forget them, with only London standing out in my memory after the first episode.
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Balancing Humor with Storyline:
While humor can be a great addition to a story, I noticed that in your story, there was an overemphasis on humor, sometimes overshadowing the central plot. It’s important to give equal attention to the directing, planning, and humor aspects of your story, to make the reading experience more enjoyable.
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That one Layering Issue:
There was a small issue in episode 3 during the class scene with Krystle. Meghan appeared to be sitting on the table? or the literal top of a chair? but it wasn’t clear. It seemed like a mistake in the layering. It happened at the very beginning of that classroom scene.
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Plot Clarity:
Episode 4 seemed to be a turning point where the plot started to become clearer. If someone only read the first three episodes, they might not understand everything. Make sure each episode contributes to the plot and provides enough context for readers.
In conclusion, “Danger” showcases great potential as an engaging story. With some adjustments and refinements, the story can fully captivate readers and leave a lasting impression. I genuinely enjoyed the use of overlays and found the dialogues to be interesting. I must express my admiration for the family relationship portrayed in Destiny’s family. It adds a refreshing dynamic to the story, and I appreciated the depth and authenticity it brought to the narrative. I encourage you to continue sharpening your storytelling skills, paying attention to pacing, emotional depth, and maintaining a strong balance between humor and the central plot.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how you continue to refine and develop “Danger” in future episodes.
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I have read Fabled: The Cursed Book earlier already 
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Thank you so much for your amazing feedback. I was off and on about the filter but getting an outside perspective helps me realize that my thoughts were right. The filter wasn’t necessary and I will remove it unless it’s a flashback or something change of scene.
I will fix the errors that you have mentioned.
Thank you for your positive words and taking the time to read my story. I’m glad you liked it!
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I haven’t published my story yet, but I have one in drafts.
I’m trying to get the last of 3 episodes finished to publish.
I accidently created a 3rd episode and I cannot delete it.
I’m making more episodes, but I don’t have the cover art done yet.
It’s a dating show, where the characters are all races, orrientations, and all are datable, as you play the shows front runner.
The main character is set, and the clothes are too, but I am working on learning the language to make things a bit more custom.
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You’re welcome! You didn’t answer my question, though.
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