She hands the class the whole time


#1

I have here a script, the raises a class both off them and then there is a role playing but when the role playing is busy she continueus to raise her glas but she does not have to, and he does it not, why is that, here is my script:

DR RENAUD (talk_flirt)
I think we need a drink too, lol.

@ANNEKE is idle_happy_glass_raised
@DR RENAUD is idle_happy_glass_raised

@ANNEKE is blush
@DR RENAUD is admire

@pause for 2

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_excited)
So i start.

label questions
ZOEKEZOEF
(What should I ask?)
choice
“Do you like cats”{
DR RENAUD
Yes i do.
goto questions
}“Did you always wanted to become a docter?”{
DR RENAUD
Yes it was my childhoud wish.
goto questions
}“Do you have siblings?”{
DR RENAUD
Yes i have one sister, she lives in Hollywood and one broter he lives still at home.
goto questions
}“So you live still at home too?”{
DR RENAUD
Don’t we change i like to know a little bit off you too?
goto questions
}“I’ve asked everything”{

}

    ZOEKEZOEF (talk_flirt)
Ok we change.

    DR RENAUD (talk_flirt)
Ok

    ZOEKEZOEF
Wait l'ets drink before lol.

@ANNEKE is idle_happy_glass_raised
@DR RENAUD is idle_happy_glass_raised

@pause for 2

    DR RENAUD (talk_happy_agree)
Here i go.
ZOEKEZOEF (talk_happy_agree)
Ok.

label questions1
DR RENAUD
(What should I ask?)
choice
“Did you always wanted become a psychiatric nurse?”{
ZOEKEZOEF
Yes because my father works there and he talks always about his work.
goto questions1
}“Do you have siblings”{
ZOEKEZOEF
Nope i am an only child. I mis a brother or a sister dough.
goto questions1
}“Iff your vacation job goes well, and we would propose to work during the year every Saturday, would you do it”{
ZOEKEZOEF
Yes of course i would.
goto questions1
}“are you single”{
ZOEKEZOEF
Yes i am.
goto questions1
}“I’ve asked everything”{

}

@pause for 3

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_apathetic)
It is late already i think i need to go home.

DR RENAUD (talk_neutral)
Ok i understand that.

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_gossip)
I have one last question dough.

DR RENAUD (talk_happy_agree)
Shoot.

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_excited)
Are you single?

DR RENAUD (think)

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_awkward)
So?

DR RENAUD (talk_sad_clutch)
No i am not, … i am not married but i live with someone and i have a shild.

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_sad)
Oh ok.

@pause for 3

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_sad_timid)
I am going see you on monday and thanks for the great evening.

DR RENAUD (talk_neutral)
You are welkom, do you need a ride home.

ZOEKEZOEF (talk_sad_clutch)
No thank you i am fine.

DR RENAUD (talk_excited)
Ok see you monday beutifful…

@pause for a beat

@ANNEKE exits left

@pause for a beat

DR RENAUD (idle_sad)
Fuck…

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@DR RENAUD exits left

@transition fade out black 3
NARRATOR
Pauze.


#2

can someone help me please.

thanks


#3

I don’t know it looks fine to me, have you tried testing it in the app?


#4

no not yet but i have an other problem, i would like 2 man fithing with a girl standing aside crying.
but figting is without parole.
and then i get an error it says you can’t have 2 characters follow each other like that ore something.


#5

Did you did something like this?

CHARACTER
CHARACTER


#6

yes but after character ( a punch animation)


#7

look i have know put in some text but the layers aren’t good and the fighting a dissaster. Maybe you can make something off it.

@BACKGROUND8 enters from right to spot 1.280 151 13 AND BACKGROUND8 faces left

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_excited)
Need a ride home beautiful?

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
No thanks i am waiting for the bus.

@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 AND ERIK faces left

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_flex)
I would like to give you a ride and much much more hihi.

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)
Go away i am not in the mood for games.

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_happy_hand_raised)
Oh pretty it is not a game, this is real, i take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.

    ANNEKE (talk_afraid)
Oh no no no no no

    ERIK (talk_doubtful)
Is here a problem my lady?

@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@BACKGROUND8 faces right

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_angry)
Will you minde your owne buisniss boy!!!

    ERIK (talk_angry)
I was not talking to you.

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_angry_accuse)
Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

    ERIK (talk_idle_punch)
Do you need a red face?

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_idle_punch)
From who you kiddo, don't let me laugh

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There....

    BACKGROUND8 (punch_receive)
Ai

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There.

    BACKGROUND8 (punch_jab)
And here.

    ERIK (punch_jab)
Haha

    BACKGROUND8 (laugh_giggle)
Hahahaha you think it is funny.

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There you go.

    BACKGROUND8 (idle_fallen)
Ooooooooooooh
    NARRATOR
Pause.

#8

This also looks fine, what is the line that say’s there is an error?


#9

it is not fine, they are to far away from each other, the faithing does not match.


#10

it is to short and the layers don’t mach


#11

So if you want them to move to a layer just type this in

@CHARACTER moves to layer#

And i also see this problem

@BACKGROUND8 enters from right to spot 1.280 151 13 AND BACKGROUND8 faces left
@ERIK enters from right to spot 1.280 315 8 AND ERIK faces left

You should type this in instead

@BACKGROUND8 spot 1.280 400 0
@BACKGROUND8 walks to spot 1.280 151 0 in 2

@ERIK spot 1.280 400 0
@ERIK walks to spot 1.280 315 0 in 2

I think that should fix it :grin:


#12

You are missing a lot of the animations after the character name. You’re doing this a lot:

CHARACTER
dialog

if you do that, than you’re going to end up having them do the same animation until it is changed.

Try this:

CHARACTER (animation)
dialog


#13

were did i do that wrong because i have given you acces to the story but i did not get feed back. :smile:


#14

And were do i have to put that and what are the layers for the girl for the wrong man and for the good guy.


#15

i did that but the guys don’t really touch each other.


#16

Try using this one, I changes a little bit and change the # in which ever number you want :grin:

@BACKGROUND8 spot 1.280 400 0
@BACKGROUND8 walks to spot 1.280 151 0 in 2 AND BACKGROUND8 moves to layer #

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_excited)
Need a ride home beautiful?

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_arms_crossed)
No thanks i am waiting for the bus.

@ERIK spot 1.280 400 0
@ERIK walks to spot 1.280 315 0 in 2 AND ERIK moves to layer #

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_flex)
I would like to give you a ride and much much more hihi.

    ANNEKE (talk_angry_defensive)
Go away i am not in the mood for games.

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_happy_hand_raised)
Oh pretty it is not a game, this is real, i take you with me and we are going to my place to have a little fun.

    ANNEKE (talk_afraid)
Oh no no no no no

    ERIK (talk_doubtful)
Is here a problem my lady?

@ANNEKE is cry_sniff_loop

@BACKGROUND8 faces right

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_angry)
Will you minde your owne buisniss boy!!!

    ERIK (talk_angry)
I was not talking to you.

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_angry_accuse)
Leave us alone and go somewhere else.

    ERIK (talk_idle_punch)
Do you need a red face?

    BACKGROUND8 (talk_idle_punch)
From who you kiddo, don't let me laugh

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There....

    BACKGROUND8 (punch_receive)
Ai

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There.

    BACKGROUND8 (punch_jab)
And here.

    ERIK (punch_jab)
Haha

    BACKGROUND8 (laugh_giggle)
Hahahaha you think it is funny.

    ERIK (punch_jab)
There you go.

    BACKGROUND8 (idle_fallen)
Ooooooooooooh
    NARRATOR
Pause.

#17

What do you mean they don’t touch each other?


#18

they are standing to far away from each other, it just does not seem real.


#19

You either need to spot them closer or put them in a screen like

@CHARACTER stands screen center AND CHARACTER faces right
@CHARACTER stands screen right AND CHARACTER faces left

or if you want them to enter just type this

@CHARACTER enters from right to screen center
@CHARACTER enters from right to screen right

That might work better though


#20

That might be the animations fault. The fighting ones are kind of tricky and you need the right spot placement. Maybe try to put them at different spots before they perform each animation? You just have to play with this.