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Should i use this quot in my story?

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As you begin to fall off a cliff, we throw a rope to save you…and yet, you scream that no one’s there to help you.”

Should i use the quot
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  • No
  • Idc
  • idk

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There are some grammatical errors.

If you only fix errors:
“You’re falling off the cliff and we’re throwing the rope yet you’re screaming no one’s helping you.”

But I think it would sound better if you wrote:
“As you begin to fall off a cliff, we throw a rope to save you…and yet, you scream that no one’s there to help you.”

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ok

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Best of luck!

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