Simple to Chaos-My First Story//Feedback please


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I’d like anyone to read my story and tell me if they’d continue reading it and the fixes it should have.
Also, it’s optional, but can you promote my story on any of your pages? That would be sooo helpful :heart:

Thank You. :heart: :smile:

Story Name: Simple to Chaos
Description: Two Best friends take a turn for the worst when a school shoot-out happens and they’re the names a gang member is calling for.

Genre: Action/Adventure
Sub-genre: Mystery, Thriller, Comedy,
Some tags: CC, Choices, LGBTQ+, Trailblazer, Cliche-breaker

Instagram : @lee.lee_26
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6065730015199232

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