Skye's Story Reviews 💕 Closed for business! [Reading 3 chapters]


#1


REQUESTS: CLOSED


Lets cut to the chase!

How does this review thing work?

  • This thing works easily! You would just have to fill out the form and I would give you constructive criticrism! I would handle everything else so dont worry!

How honest are you at reviewing?

  • That would depend on you if you want me to be extra honest in other words extra harsh in reviewing your story you can ask me to be partially honest / not to harsh tho

Have you reviewed stories before?

  • Yes I have! But im not a master at reviewing stories, I know how I want a good story tho!

THREAD RULES

  • Please be patient while I review your story, it might take time to put together the pieces of what Im going to have to say here as im reading 3 CHAPTERS per story it might take long

  • Dont tell me I review like trash, Im doing my best and it deels me less motivated to review your story

  • Do not like ask for a review on 20 people, you are allowed to ask other people HOWEVER please keep it maximum to 10


Fill out form

Story Title:
Authors name:
In which style is your story? (INK, LIMELIGHT OR CLASSIC):
Episodes:
Genre:
Short description (1-3 sentences is fine):
Story perks:
Customization/Choices matter?:
Story cover:
Story link:
Do you want me to tell you the review in pm or public?:
Any extra notes?:
How do you want the story to be reviewed? (Details below)(optional):

Fill out form EXAMPLE

Story Title: Bad goes good, good goes bad
Authors name: Skye
In which style is your story? (INK, LIMELIGHT OR CLASSIC): Ink all the way!
Episodes: 3 [ONGOING]
Genre: Drama
Short description (1-3 sentences is fine): After an all night party with your bros, you change from bad boy to good boy. What would happen if a girl forces to be back from who you were before?
Story perks:

  • There are mostly good boys
  • Protagonist is a male
  • Choose a male or female interest! this is LGBTQ+

Customization/Choices matter?: limited/yes!
Story cover: cover goes here
Story link: link goes here
Do you want me to tell you the review in pm or public?: I would like to keep it private
Any extra notes?: This story contains really mature themes and is definitely not for people under the age of 18!
How do you want the story to be reviewed? (Details below)(optional): Review it however you like! Although I would like you to review the characters the best way possible and the story plot

How I review stories

Story title:
Authors name:


A. Mainly about the body of the story
Story plot [/10]:
Cliche rating [/5]:
Grammar [/10]:
Usage of spot directing and overlays [/10]:
Choices have an impact? [/5]:
Length [/10]:

B. First impressions of the story
Cover [/5]:
Title [/5]:
Summary [/10]:
Main impression of story [/5]:

C. Characters
Personality [/5]:
Look/customization [/5]:
Outfits: [/5]:
Animations [/5]:

D. Usage of own backgrounds/overlays etc.
Uses backgrounds overlays of their own? [/10]:
Does the background look good? [/10]:
Gives credit of someone else’s work? [/5]:
Directing of overlays? [/10]:

E. Anything else
Chapter 1 rating [/10]:
Chapter 2 rating [/10]:
Chapter 3 rating [/10]:
Do I want to read the story more? [/5]:
Overall impressions [/10]:
Anything else: [/5]:


Overall score:
Overall review/What i like what i dont like:
Notes I didnt add:
Screenshot of favorite/worst moments:

Requests Finished

@MeadowH story “TRAPPED”

Notes: A review might take up to a few hours to a few weeks!


#2

Story Title: Trapped
Authors name: Meadow
In which style is your story? (INK, LIMELIGHT OR CLASSIC): Limelight
Episodes: 8 so far
Genre: Drama/romance
Short description (1-3 sentences is fine): Your parents chuck you into Bellthorne Academy- a boarding school for only the richest. There, you meet a mysterious stranger who assigns you on a mission for millions of dollars.
Story perks:
. Seems cliche at first but it’s NOT :sweat_smile:
. Idk what to put haha
Customization/Choices matter?: there is customisation, choices don’t matter much.
Story cover:


Story link:

Do you want me to tell you the review in pm or public?: Pm please
Any extra notes?:
How do you want the story to be reviewed? (Details below)(optional): I don’t mind, it’s up to you. :blush:

Thanks sm


#3

Your request is accepted and would be reviewed right away! Thanks for requesting :two_hearts:


#4

Thanks!


#5

Story Title: The Four Horsemen
Authors name: S_Unique
In which style is your story? INK
Episodes: 6
Genre: Fantasy
Short description (1-3 sentences is fine): 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter
Story perks: Male MC.
Customization/Choices matter?: Yes and Yes
Story cover:


Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384
Do you want me to tell you the review in pm or public?: PM
Any extra notes?: English is not my language
How do you want the story to be reviewed? Review it however you want. :slight_smile:


#6

Story Title: the good-bye
Authors name: Marca
In which style is your story? (INK, LIMELIGHT OR CLASSIC): LL
Episodes: 5 so far
Genre: romance
Short description: You are really broke, working at your BFF’s bakery doesn’t really help. But what happens when you meet your lover, again?
Story perks:
. Choose the choice you want from your heart.
Customization/Choices matter?: there are customisations but limited.
Choices DO matter, but not all.
Story cover:limelight_charater_design_posterImage_1K8F5z3twi
Link:

I want the review to be in pm

Extra notes: some characters are LGBT+, not going to say the characters because I want it to be a surprise.
(And I know you’re gonna say it’s too short for the first two episodes.)

How do you want the story to be reviewed?
partially honest / not to harsh (I can’t take too much pain :sweat_smile:)


#7

Request is accepted and is started right away! Thanks for requesting :two_hearts:


#8

Request is accepted and is started right away! Thanks for requesting :heart:


#9

your welcome!:blush:


#11

I’d love if you could review my story please (when you reopen) :heart:

Story Title: Crossed Paths
Author’s name: Dreamer
Style: INK
Episodes: 4 (5 coming soon)
Genre: Rom-Com
Description: Mindy’s life is filled with joy and laughter but tainted with a twinge of heartbreak. What happens when Derek comes crashing into her life changing the way she sees love?
Story perks: Does sarcasm count?
Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5294643993772032
Story Cover:


Telling review: PM please
Any extra notes? If you could provide comments for each episode (not necessary though) :slight_smile:
Review Style: You know best :heart:


#12

Closed for now :blush:


#13

Ah sorry! All the best :heart:


#14

Your request is accepted tho! :heavy_heart_exclamation:


#15

Thanks :heart: :heart:


#16

Application form-
Story Title: DD:Rock Your Socks Off
Authors name: Isaiah
In which style is your story? (INK OR LIMELIGHT?)Limelight
Episodes: 3
Genre: (Romance, Drama)
Short description:
Baby is an aspiring dancer who gets caught up in a life or death feud all for the love of her life, Johnny…
Choices Matter (CC) Limelight


#17

Story Title: Thrill of the Hunt
Authors name: azariasin (on episode app) or Azaria Sin
In which style is your story? (INK, LIMELIGHT OR CLASSIC): Ink
Episodes: 6 published, though season 1 is already done. Just finetuning it :slight_smile:
Genre: Mystery/Thriller/Romance
Short description (1-3 sentences is fine):
Story perks: Has its share of comedic elements, and fully developing important characters.
Customization/Choices matter?: Yes and yes.
Story cover:


Story link:
Do you want me to tell you the review in pm or public?: Public is fine.
Any extra notes?:
How do you want the story to be reviewed? (Details below)(optional):
1)Directing
2)Writing style
3)Characterizations, especially with MC.


#18

Hey, I saw your thread pop up and I was wondering if you’d be willing to read whatI have so far of my unpublished story? It’s only around the first 12 minutes of what I’ve got prepared for the first episode, so it’s not terribly short :sweat_smile:


#19

Title: Daughter of the Blue Dragon
Authors name: WolfGamerGirl37
In which style is your story: INK
Episodes: 5 (ongoing/not published)
Genre: Drama/Romance
Short description: Lena Okumura is the daughter of a Yakuza boss, who is being setup for an arranged marriage. She decides to run away when tragedy strikes which causes an uproar with deadly consequences.
Story Perks:

  • Follows female main character with two love interests through storyline
  • You get to customize clothing and hair during the story line for most characters
  • You get to learn about Japanese culture and the meaning of certain terms used during the story
  • Based in Japan and America
    Customization/Choice matter? Certain characters/ not yet( later on yes)
    Story Cover: Not published yet/ cover not visible on app
    Story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5158041349652480
    Pm or Public review: pm please
    Any extra notes: I’m working on smoothing the story so there might be some spots that are still rough. Also, this story does used mature language. The story uses sound as well.
    How do you want the story to be reviewed? I’m okay with however you review it. I just want you to focus on the plot and the characters as well. The story is intricately connected through the past and present of the character’s lives.

#20

For everyone who requested after @Days request, IT HAS NOT BEEN ACCEPTED
As said at top, this is CLOSED FOR NOW


#22

Story title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Authors name - Hannah & Carly
Style - ink
Episodes - 5 [ONGOING]
Genre - mystery
Short description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Story perks - long chapters, authors are English so it’s easy to read, point system, outfit, hair and make up choices
Customisation - none
Choices matter - some of them
Story cover -
this is it just now image
But I’m waiting for this one to be approved


Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896
Review in public please
Any notes - it does use mature language
Just review it however you like

Thanks so much :blush: