Bad Behavior by @LiyahxWrites
Review
3 Episodes Read
Cover: Pretty text. Pretty background. Art style throws me off a little, but it’s unique 
Big Cover: V cute 
Description: Enticing. Just a miscapitalisation case. Or maybe it was supposed to be like that 🤷
Title: Easily searchable but non-distinguishable from other stories with the same name.
Backgrounds/Overlays: I really like the customs you made/uploaded. V beautiful.
Animations/Directing: Very, very smooth. Incredible work. I only saw a couple of mistakes.
- Lucas floating on top of his bed
- Ryan and Rachel with a black/missing background(s) in episode 2
Sound: Fits theme.
Spelling and Punctuation: Satisfactory. Both of us love run- ons A couple of spelling mistake and tense mess ups- but other than that, nothing.
Dialogue Boxes: The pink theme was a good choice. Dialogue boxes were where they were supposed to be.
Progression of Time/Scene Changes Between Main Characters: Kind of weird because your directing is so good and smooth, but I understand it. 
Pros:
• Each one of the main character’s storylines is interesting and I’m curious as to where they’re going 
• Very good scripting
• You worked really hard on set dressing, and it really shows
• Use of readerMessage for character relationships
• The choice to punch, kick, and slap Tina 
Cons:
• A’s mom is just RUDE 
• I know we have to thank our beautiful background and overlay makers for their amazing stuff, but you have a LOT of people to thank and it kinda clutters up the screen 
• Tina is a crazy bitch
CC
Simple Directing
Advanced Directing
Diversity Scale:
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Nothing particularly diverse. No cultures/ideas explored. Irrelevant to the story.
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Outfits Are Cute
Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
Uses Sound
Limelight
Ink
Classic
TL;DR: Yeah, this is going in my favourites