Compulsion by @Aims1141
Review
3 Episodes Read
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Title: Satisfactory.
Backgrounds/Overlays: No missing/black screens. You did one mirror scene where there was an actual reflection and I was like 
The custom ones you uploaded to put at the end of the episode(s) were weird and funny (to me) 
Animations/Directing: Very. Good. Seriously, how do you people get so good at this?!
Sound: Good where it is, bad where it isn’t. Sometimes audio goes from music to no sound at all and it throws me off. But where it is, it works.
Spelling and Punctuation: I don’t see anything wrong.
Dialogue Boxes: In the right spots. Nice color choice.
Progression of Time: Works.
Pros:
• My reaction to Zyro 50% of the time he’s on screen: 
• Locked choices.
• Timed choices.
• Okay. Just the choices in general. They make the dialogue lean.
• Punching a pedo 
• Episode Hair Dye 
• INK characters (miraculously) don’t look like the same person
• Episodes have a good length and end on a note that makes you want to click to the next one
• Use of readerMessage
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Cons:
• Some people really hate timed/locked choices, which may turn them off from the story I, however, find them compelling; and, they keep me focused on the story. Like I can’t just walk away to watch something on TV and come back 30 minutes later wondering what I was doing.
• Bro, Salma is gonna get punched too
CC
Simple Directing
Advanced Directing
Diversity Scale:
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[🏽 <----- It’s more about diversity within the characters. There aren’t any cultures or ideas explored, but the characters really seem different from the other characters in the story. I can easily tell them apart and it seems like they could be real people. I like that.
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Outfits Are Cute
Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
Uses Sound
Limelight
Ink
Classic
TL;DR: I don’t generally even consider clicking on gang/mafia related stories because… well… they’re all related. On Episode, quite a lot of them are the same. This particular story, though, excites me. I can’t say why for sure… but I like it. I don’t feel like I’m going to be bored while watching/reading it. And I love the humor.