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Review

3 Episodes Read

Cover: Beautiful.
Big Cover: Same as small cover. Still beautiful.
Description: Good. Cliche by Episode standards, but good.
Title: No. #ThanksRobinThicke :joy_cat:


Backgrounds/Overlays: Good. Custom ones are also beautiful.
Animations/Directing: Very good.
Sound: Noice.
Spelling and Punctuation: Perfect.
Dialogue Boxes: Good.

Progression of Time: Makes sense.


Pros:
• I’ve never seen someone actually make the hair Harper has on work. Congrats! :star_struck:
• Jake was nice.

Cons:
• I walked into work literally in my underwear and no one said anything about it. :joy:
• I :clap: Don’t :clap: Care :clap: About :clap: Quinn​:clap: AT :clap: ALL :clap:. I don’t know why, but I just don’t. Also, I hate when characters get broken up with by someone I (read: the reader) doesn’t even really know yet. The broken-up-with character always ends up looking whiny and nihilistic because we (the reader) haven’t spent enough time with the characters in said broken-up-relationship to even know how we should feel.
• Uhhh Quinn assumes just because Aiden sleeps around he’s just automatically a bad guy and that’s just :zipper_mouth_face::zipper_mouth_face: Actually Quinn makes a lot of assumptions. About a lot of things. How old is she supposed to be?! :joy:
• This whole thing reminds me of The Bad Boy Stole My Bra
• Honestly, the whole story to me is just very pretty and that’s it. There’s no substance. Nothing that makes me want to keep going.It’s very Episode-ish.


:white_check_mark: CC
:x: Simple Directing
:white_check_mark: Advanced Directing
Diversity Scale:
[🏻 All of the characters are basically the same characters with different faces. In real life, I would be terrified by these robotic “people”. Unless… they’re not people!!! Conspiracy theory?!
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:white_check_mark: Outfits Are Cute
:white_check_mark: Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
:white_check_mark: Uses Sound

:white_check_mark:Limelight
:x:Ink
:x:Classic


TL;DR: This is something Episode would buy.