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Tribe of Malapinchi by @JannahJackson

Review

1 Episode Read (I could tell it was one of those things I’d have to wait to be completely done to finish reading or else I’d get mad :joy:)

Cover: Simple. Pretty. Mysterious. Alluring. Yes, I want to click on you.
Big Cover: Almost the same as the small cover but just… not as good. I don’t like how the sun and the moon are joined in the middle. It just doesn’t make any sense. This is a weird nitpik, but why can I see the whole moon and only half of the sun :joy:
Description: Tells me enough that I’m interested but not enough that I can guess the ending. And I’m very good at guessing endings. :joy: Perfect.
Title: Unique. Exotic? Well, exotic for me. Where I live, people usually say K©lan instead of tribe. Off-topic, but fun fact. :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

Also, random question: Why is there a copyright symbol in the title? To scare off people who like to steal stuff?


Backgrounds/Overlays: Detailed. Make sense.
Animations/Directing: Excellent.
Sound: Works. Sometimes it randomly stops but that’s probably just me taking 4000 hours to read one sentence. :joy:
Spelling and Punctuation: Works.
Dialogue Boxes: Works.

Progression of Time: Works.


Pros:
• Um… you ask us if we’re hearing impaired right at the beginning so I love you? I mean, I’m not, but people usually don’t think of these things. Very neat.
• Um… again I am delighted with all the choices presented to me before the story even starts where you put a scene selection in?! I knew I was easily impressed but wow
• When you use readerMessage, you don’t cover up the screen with random stuff
• I don’t know why I did it, but I chose to use my profile avatar and it was great
• Rudo said I looked pale even though I was black :joy:

Cons:
• The characters think too much. And yes, I know that sounds crazy. :joy:
• For .05 seconds you tricked me into believing Episode Offline was real :imp::imp::imp:


:white_check_mark: CC
:x: Simple Directing
:x: Advanced Directing
:white_check_mark: Very Advanced Directing
Diversity Scale:
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:white_check_mark: Outfits Are Cute
:white_check_mark: Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
:white_check_mark: Uses Sound

:white_check_mark:Limelight
:x:Ink
:x:Classic


TL;DR: How did you code this?! Girl :dizzy_face::heart_eyes::crazy_face: