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Run at Midnight by @TiffyAlice

Review

2 Episodes Read

Cover: Cute. Simple. Love the colours. Looks like a werewolf thing, though. :joy:
Big Cover: Also cute. Makes me wonder what got them to that point.
Description: Satisfactory. Maybe remove “the” from the second sentence.
Title: I like it.


Backgrounds/Overlays: Work.
Animations/Directing: Works.
Sound: Works.
Spelling and Punctuation: Satisfactory. A few mistakes, but nothing that just sucks
Dialogue Boxes: Well placed. Pretty sure it’s in the default color, but for some reason I felt like pointing out that I liked that.

Progression of Time: From the ending of the first Episode to the beginning on the second, I got confused :joy:


Pros:
• I was the 47th read xD
• I really liked that Tiffy was an athlete and Asian and a main character. You’re right- you don’t see either of those a lot as main characters. It works well here.
• Characters have different heights
• Parisian music

Cons:
• What the hell is wrong with Amber :joy:
• Episode one ends after nothing happens
• I would be in class E :sob::joy:
• Sometimes you say too much, either in dialogue boxes or readerMessage.


:white_check_mark: CC
:white_check_mark: Simple Directing
:x: Advanced Directing
Diversity Scale:
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[🏾 :kissing:
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:white_check_mark: Outfits Are Cute
:white_check_mark: Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
:white_check_mark: Uses Sound

:x:Limelight
:white_check_mark: Ink
:x:Classic

• In the first chapter, was the "He didn’t steal my heart, I let him take it supposed to pop up twice? In the second chapter, it’s just kind of wonky overall.


TL;DR: I’m ready for some romance :genie::two_hearts: