Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane by @Marshmallow_O
Review
4 Episodes Read
Cover: 10/10 
I actually really like it
Big Cover: Same as small cover and still beautiful.
Description: Cliche. I wouldn’t have clicked further on the story if you didn’t have “choices matter” added in. 
It reminds me of the Pretty Little Liars story and I barley got through that.
Title: Unique. Couldn’t mistake it for anything else.
Backgrounds/Overlays: I love your overlays/custom backgrounds so far. They add a lot to the story.
Animations/Directing: Smooth & Clear. Technically impressive. Next level.
Sound: Works.
Spelling and Punctuation: Perfect?! How is that even possible?!!!
Dialogue Boxes: Well placed.
Progression of Time: Perfect. I know when things are happening and when they are happening.
Pros:
• Holy. Fckng. Sh*t. There are so many background characters. And they’re so well placed. Kudos! 
• Birth giver & sperm provider
• Seems like choices really DO matter.
• Menu at the beginning of a new episode reminds me of a rpg menu
• You put a lot of work in, and it really shows
Cons:
• A lot of the characters look the same. A lot of the girls have the same eyes/noses. Same with the guys. Without customising them, of course.
CC
Simple Directing
Advanced Directing
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Outfits Are Cute
Custom Backgrounds/ Overlays
Uses Sound
Limelight
Ink
Classic
TL;DR: Alluring diegesis and beautiful execution. I want to see this one through 'till the end.