Smileys Story Reviews!

Hey everyone! Welcome to my review your story thread!! I figured if I have extra time to read some stories!! But there are a few rules :slight_smile:

~ I will not read fantasy from here on out, it’s nothing personal, I just don’t enjoy it and can’t give you a fair review!! (Will read everything else, I :heart:Mystery)

~ Your story must have less than 1k reads
(I’m helping those small authors😉)

~ You can give more than one story that you’d like reviewed!

~ Do not feel offended from anything I say. It’s just constructed criticism to try and help you get better!

~ Please know that I won’t read you story in a few minutes, this is just on my spare time when I find time

~ I will read 3 chapters and send sreenshots

Thanks guys!!

Current Waiting list:

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omg thanks so much for this! if love a review! :grin::sparkling_heart:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Summary: Time is running out as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.
Chapters: 4 (More to come)
Style: Limelight

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Shortened Link:

Cool I’ll check it out soon!

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My story: © Tribe of Malapinchi
Author: Jannah Jackson
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Horror/Fantasy/Adventure
Story style: Secret Surprise :wink:
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets in Asia. Can you survive, solve the havoc and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Episodes: 5/6


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Story Title: MC: The Bar on 23rd
Author Name: Dr.Smile
Genre: Romance
Description/Summary of Story:
The link between taking action and nostalgia is an odd stranger who seems to poison him with the one thing that sunk him in the first place: love.

Thanks, lovely! <3

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Hi! Thank you so much for doing this! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I hope you’ll feel like checking mine out and reviewing it:

Title: Rich Girls Cry Too
Author: Ava Josefine
Genre: Drama
Plot/Summary: Vera’s dream of becoming a famous musician feels closer than ever when a new, big TV-show about her school is being made. But things don’t turn out the way she expects them to.
Style: Limelight


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Thank you for thisss! My story hasn’t been published yet!

  • TITLE: Compulsion
  • AUTHOR: Aimee. A
  • GENRE: Romance, comedy and action!
  • CHAPTERS PUBLISHED: Please could you only read 2 chapters, I haven’t finished episode 3 yet!
  • DESCRIPTION: Zyro Morte is sent on death row. He’s given the chance to extend his time after the FBI need him for a mission. Simple? One problem, he has to jeopardize his soulmates family!?
  • COVER: (Not done yet!)
  • LINK:

Thanks again! :hearts::hearts

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I’ll try to look at everyone’s whenever I get the chance! Thank you luvs!


Yeah! I can only read 2, when i get to it if you want me to read 3 just lmk!!

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Yay! Thank you! :heartbeat:

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