(solved) Can someone proofread my first episode for free?

Dianaepi · February 16, 2021, 12:13pm

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4701811648430080.
(that’s the link)
So it’s my first story and I really want it to be good. I’m just 16 so I can’t really pay soo I just wanted to know if anyone could proofread and give me their opinion on it for free?

JustAPerson · February 16, 2021, 1:02pm

I can read it and pm you the changes!

NeahM · February 16, 2021, 1:02pm

I would love to!

Dianaepi · February 16, 2021, 1:14pm

That would be great! Thank you so much

JustAPerson · February 16, 2021, 1:15pm

No problem, I’ll start reading right away

Qettix · February 17, 2021, 1:11pm

Hi! I’d like to read it, too ^^

Dianaepi · February 17, 2021, 5:58pm

Hi… So I actually already found someone to proofread it but if you still want to give me your opinion on it (the dialogues and so on) I’d be very happy to hear you

xXzoeyXx · February 17, 2021, 8:16pm

I can read it!

Dianaepi · February 17, 2021, 8:17pm

I already found someone but thank you

xXzoeyXx · February 17, 2021, 8:22pm

Okay! thats fine!

system · March 20, 2021, 6:23am

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