Somebody anybody pleeeeassseeee helllpppp

@Jade.epi @Apes

FOR SOME REASON every time i pick on a outfit in my script it goes directly to the @STARR exits right help please

choice (Go_or_not_go)
“Go to the club and get a new outfit and get cheered up!” {

@zoom on 386 461 to 152% in 0

    STARR (talk_shrug_neutral)
What the hell lets go!

&zoom reset

@STARR walks to spot 0.634 -41 328 AND STARR is run_athletic_neutral_loop
@BERLINDA walks to spot 0.959 -45 145
@GINA walks to spot 0.959 -63 148
music juvie_seedy
@transition fade out black 5.5

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY
@BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS stands screen center in zone 2 AND BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS faces left
&BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CROP TOP OUTFIT stands screen left in zone 2 AND CROP TOP OUTFIT faces left
&CROP TOP OUTFIT starts flirt_wink_happy
@CUTE N CASUAL spot 1.280 263 3 in zone 2 AND CUTE N CASUAL faces left
&CUTE N CASUAL starts idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop
@DRESS 1 spot 1.280 55 2 in zone 3 AND DRESS 1 faces left
&DRESS 1 starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@DRESS 2 stands screen center in zone 3 AND DRESS 2 faces left
&DRESS 2 starts laugh_giggle
@TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS stands screen right in zone 3 AND TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS faces left
&TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@cut to zone 1

@STARR enters from left to screen left
&BERLINDA enters from left to upscreen left
&GINA enters from left to screen center

    STARR (talk_excited_happy)
Oh my goodness it looks like I am in heaven!

    GINA (talk_explain_neutral)
I know right! I am about to die!

@BERLINDA starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

@CLERK enters from right to screen right

    CLERK (talk_greet_neutral)
Hi, welcome to my boutique!

    CLERK (talk_shrug_neutral)
Who is this for?

    BERLINDA (talk_agree_happy)
Are friend Starr turn Starr into a star!

@BERLINDA starts laugh_giggle AND STARR starts laugh_giggle

    CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Alright here are your choices!

@pan to zone 2

&zoom on 320 378 to 199% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
Here we have a croptop with blue shorts!

@zoom on 515 364 to 199% in 0.4

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
Here we have Blue with blue jeans.

@zoom on 640 439 to 199% in 0.4

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
Also we have keep it cute and casual.

@pan to zone 3

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
A purple short dress.

@zoom on 823 407 to 199% in 0.4

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
Purple long dress.

@zoom on 960 418 to 262% in 0.4

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
A tank with oversized shorts.

&zoom reset

@pan to zone 2

readerMessage YOU GET ONE CHANCE!!

    CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Pick what you would like!

choice
“Blue with blue jeans” {

@zoom on 515 364 to 199% in 0.4
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@cut to zone 1
@STARR spot 1.280 390 27 in zone 1 AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into Blue with blue jeans
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Crop top outfit” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CROP TOP OUTFIT_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Cute n Casual” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CUTE AND CASUAL_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“next page” {

@pan to zone 3

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
Heres the next page

choice
“Purple short dress” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 1
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Purple long dress” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 2
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“A tank with oversized shorts” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Go back” {

@pan to zone 2

    CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
What do you want to pick!

choice
“Blue with blue jeans” {

@zoom on 515 364 to 199% in 0.4
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@cut to zone 1
@STARR spot 1.280 390 27 in zone 1 AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into Blue with blue jeans
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Crop top outfit” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CROP TOP OUTFIT_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Cute n Casual” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CUTE AND CASUAL_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“next page” {

@pan to zone 3

    NARRATOR (CLERK)
Heres the next page

choice
“Purple short dress” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 1
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“Purple long dress” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 2
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“A tank with oversized shorts” {

@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@pause for a beat

@transition fade out black

}
“go back” {

@pan to zone 2

}

}

INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY
@zoom reset
@BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS stands screen center in zone 2 AND BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS faces left
&BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CROP TOP OUTFIT stands screen left in zone 2 AND CROP TOP OUTFIT faces left
&CROP TOP OUTFIT starts flirt_wink_happy
@CUTE N CASUAL spot 1.280 263 3 in zone 2 AND CUTE N CASUAL faces left
&CUTE N CASUAL starts idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop
@DRESS 1 spot 1.280 55 2 in zone 3 AND DRESS 1 faces left
&DRESS 1 starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@DRESS 2 stands screen center in zone 3 AND DRESS 2 faces left
&DRESS 2 starts laugh_giggle
@TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS stands screen right in zone 3 AND TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS faces left
&TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@STARR stands screen left AND STARR faces right
@BERLINDA stands upscreen left AND BERLINDA faces right
@GINA stands screen center AND GINA faces right
@CLERK stands screen right AND CLERK faces left
@STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@cut to zone 1

    CLERK (talk_neutral)
Alright! Perfect!

    GINA (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
How much?

@GINA starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

    CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Oh, its okay, free for you guys!

    BERLINDA (talk_agree_happy)
Thanks!

@BERLINDA exits left AND STARR exits left AND GINA exits left
INT. PARTY CLUB - NIGHT
music music_popclubsync
@cut to zone 3
@PARTYGIRL3 spot 0.847 271 197 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL3 faces left AND PARTYGIRL3 moves to layer 2
@PARTYGIRL2 spot 0.886 68 193 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL2 faces right AND PARTYGIRL1 moves to layer 0
@PARTYGIRL1 spot 0.730 152 281 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL1 faces right AND PARTYGIRL1 moves to layer -5
@PARTYGIRL5 spot 0.839 55 225 in zone 3 AND PARTYGIRL5 faces right AND PARTYGIRL5 moves to layer 3
@PARTYGIRL4 spot 0.830 204 229 in zone 3 AND PARTYGIRL4 faces right AND PARTYGIRL4 moves to layer 2
@PARTY 4 spot 0.791 133 261 in zone 3 AND PARTY 4 faces left AND PARTY 4 moves to layer 0
@PARTYBOY 5 spot 0.821 267 246 in zone 3 AND PARTYBOY 5 faces left AND PARTYBOY 5 moves to layer 1
@PARTYBOY1 spot 0.866 422 219 in zone 3 AND PARTYBOY1 faces right AND PARTYBOY1 moves to layer 2
@PARTYBOY2 spot 0.827 168 234 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY2 faces left AND PARTYBOY2 moves to layer 0
@PARTYBOY3 spot 0.821 267 246 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY3 faces left AND PARTYBOY3 moves to layer 1
@PARTYBOY1 spot 0.866 53 221 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY1 faces right AND PARTYBOY1 moves to layer 2
&PARTYBOY2 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY3 starts sing_armsdown_loop_rear
&PARTYBOY1 starts sing_airguitar_neutral_loop
&PARTY 4 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY 5 starts talk_agree_happy
&PARTYGIRL2 starts dance_drop_it
&PARTYGIRL1 starts dance_shake_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL3 starts dance_grind_neutral_loop
&PARTYGIRL4 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL5 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
@pause for 1
@pan to zone 2
@pan to zone 1
&PARTYBOY2 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY3 starts sing_armsdown_loop_rear
&PARTYBOY1 starts sing_airguitar_neutral_loop
&PARTY 4 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY 5 starts talk_agree_happy
&PARTYGIRL2 starts dance_drop_it
&PARTYGIRL1 starts dance_shake_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL3 starts dance_grind_neutral_loop
&PARTYGIRL4 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL5 starts dance_groove_happy_loop

@BERLINDA changes into dress3_outfit
@GINA changes into Dress4_outfit
@STARR enters from left to screen left
@GINA enters from left to upscreen left
@BERLINDA enters from left to screen center

    GINA (talk_agree_happy)
Now this is a party!

    BERLINDA (talk_excited_happy)
Yeah, Gina, Starr I'm so glad you decided to come.

    STARR (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Yeah, other wise I would be sulking.

    GINA (talk_excited_happy)
Enough talking lets start partying!

@GINA exits right AND GINA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop
@BERLINDA stands screen center AND BERLINDA faces left

    BERLINDA (talk_shrug_concerned)
You coming Starr?

    STARR (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Nah, I think I'll have a drink first.

    BERLINDA (talk_shrug_neutral)
Alright, if you need I'll be on the dance floor!

@BERLINDA exits right AND BERLINDA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop

@STARR is deepbreath

@STARR exits left AND STARR starts walk_sad_loop
INT. BAR - NIGHT with BAR
@PATRICK stands screen center AND PATRICK faces left AND PATRICK moves to layer 0
@STARR enters from left to screen center AND STARR starts walk_sad_loop AND STARR moves to layer 1
&PATRICK starts tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear

}

}

}
“Go home and sulk” {

@STARR stands screen center

}

@STARR exits right

@Apes
@JemU776

There’s no errors? Have you tried resetting story progress and using the app to preview it?

every time i click for example a tank with oversized shorts it goes directly to the end.

Think I’ve fixed it give me a few mins to test it…

choice (Go_or_not_go)
“Go to the club and get a new outfit and get cheered up!” {
@zoom on 386 461 to 152% in 0
STARR (talk_shrug_neutral)
What the hell lets go!
&zoom reset
@STARR walks to spot 0.634 -41 328 AND STARR is run_athletic_neutral_loop
@BERLINDA walks to spot 0.959 -45 145
@GINA walks to spot 0.959 -63 148
music juvie_seedy
@transition fade out black 5.5
INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY
@BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS stands screen center in zone 2 AND BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS faces left
&BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CROP TOP OUTFIT stands screen left in zone 2 AND CROP TOP OUTFIT faces left
&CROP TOP OUTFIT starts flirt_wink_happy
@CUTE N CASUAL spot 1.280 263 3 in zone 2 AND CUTE N CASUAL faces left
&CUTE N CASUAL starts idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop
@DRESS 1 spot 1.280 55 2 in zone 3 AND DRESS 1 faces left
&DRESS 1 starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@DRESS 2 stands screen center in zone 3 AND DRESS 2 faces left
&DRESS 2 starts laugh_giggle
@TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS stands screen right in zone 3 AND TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS faces left
&TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@cut to zone 1
@STARR enters from left to screen left
&BERLINDA enters from left to upscreen left
&GINA enters from left to screen center
STARR (talk_excited_happy)
Oh my goodness it looks like I am in heaven!

    GINA (talk_explain_neutral)
I know right! I am about to die!

@BERLINDA starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@CLERK enters from right to screen right
CLERK (talk_greet_neutral)
Hi, welcome to my boutique!

    CLERK (talk_shrug_neutral)
Who is this for?

    BERLINDA (talk_agree_happy)
Are friend Starr turn Starr into a star!

@BERLINDA starts laugh_giggle AND STARR starts laugh_giggle
CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Alright here are your choices!
@pan to zone 2
&zoom on 320 378 to 199% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
Here we have a croptop with blue shorts!
@zoom on 515 364 to 199% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
Here we have Blue with blue jeans.
@zoom on 640 439 to 199% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
Also we have keep it cute and casual.
@pan to zone 3
NARRATOR (CLERK)
A purple short dress.
@zoom on 823 407 to 199% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
Purple long dress.
@zoom on 960 418 to 262% in 0.4
NARRATOR (CLERK)
A tank with oversized shorts.
&zoom reset
@pan to zone 2
readerMessage YOU GET ONE CHANCE!!
CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Pick what you would like!
choice
“Blue with blue jeans” {
@zoom on 515 364 to 199% in 0.4
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@cut to zone 1
@STARR spot 1.280 390 27 in zone 1 AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into Blue with blue jeans
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
“Crop top outfit” {
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CROP TOP OUTFIT_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
“Cute n Casual” {
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into CUTE AND CASUAL_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
“Purple short dress” {
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 1
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
“Purple long dress” {
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into dress 2
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
“A tank with oversized shorts” {
@transition fade out black
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
@STARR stands screen center AND STARR faces left
@STARR changes into TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS_default
&STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@transition fade out black
}
INT. FASHION BOUTIQUE OL - DAY
@zoom reset
@BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS stands screen center in zone 2 AND BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS faces left
&BLUE WITH BLUE JEANS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CROP TOP OUTFIT stands screen left in zone 2 AND CROP TOP OUTFIT faces left
&CROP TOP OUTFIT starts flirt_wink_happy
@CUTE N CASUAL spot 1.280 263 3 in zone 2 AND CUTE N CASUAL faces left
&CUTE N CASUAL starts idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop
@DRESS 1 spot 1.280 55 2 in zone 3 AND DRESS 1 faces left
&DRESS 1 starts idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@DRESS 2 stands screen center in zone 3 AND DRESS 2 faces left
&DRESS 2 starts laugh_giggle
@TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS stands screen right in zone 3 AND TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS faces left
&TANK WITH OVERSIZED SHORTS starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@STARR stands screen left AND STARR faces right
@BERLINDA stands upscreen left AND BERLINDA faces right
@GINA stands screen center AND GINA faces right
@CLERK stands screen right AND CLERK faces left
@STARR starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@cut to zone 1
CLERK (talk_neutral)
Alright! Perfect!

    GINA (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
How much?

@GINA starts idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
CLERK (talk_agree_happy)
Oh, its okay, free for you guys!

    BERLINDA (talk_agree_happy)
Thanks!

@BERLINDA exits left AND STARR exits left AND GINA exits left
INT. LA APARTMENT - DAY
music music_popclubsync
@cut to zone 3
INT. PARTY CLUB - NIGHT
music music_popclubsync
@cut to zone 3
@PARTYGIRL3 spot 0.847 271 197 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL3 faces left AND PARTYGIRL3 moves to layer 2
@PARTYGIRL2 spot 0.886 68 193 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL2 faces right AND PARTYGIRL1 moves to layer 0
@PARTYGIRL1 spot 0.730 152 281 in zone 1 AND PARTYGIRL1 faces right AND PARTYGIRL1 moves to layer -5
@PARTYGIRL5 spot 0.839 55 225 in zone 3 AND PARTYGIRL5 faces right AND PARTYGIRL5 moves to layer 3
@PARTYGIRL4 spot 0.830 204 229 in zone 3 AND PARTYGIRL4 faces right AND PARTYGIRL4 moves to layer 2
@PARTY 4 spot 0.791 133 261 in zone 3 AND PARTY 4 faces left AND PARTY 4 moves to layer 0
@PARTYBOY 5 spot 0.821 267 246 in zone 3 AND PARTYBOY 5 faces left AND PARTYBOY 5 moves to layer 1
@PARTYBOY1 spot 0.866 422 219 in zone 3 AND PARTYBOY1 faces right AND PARTYBOY1 moves to layer 2
@PARTYBOY2 spot 0.827 168 234 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY2 faces left AND PARTYBOY2 moves to layer 0
@PARTYBOY3 spot 0.821 267 246 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY3 faces left AND PARTYBOY3 moves to layer 1
@PARTYBOY1 spot 0.866 53 221 in zone 2 AND PARTYBOY1 faces right AND PARTYBOY1 moves to layer 2
&PARTYBOY2 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY3 starts sing_armsdown_loop_rear
&PARTYBOY1 starts sing_airguitar_neutral_loop
&PARTY 4 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY 5 starts talk_agree_happy
&PARTYGIRL2 starts dance_drop_it
&PARTYGIRL1 starts dance_shake_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL3 starts dance_grind_neutral_loop
&PARTYGIRL4 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL5 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
@pause for 1
@pan to zone 2
@pan to zone 1
&PARTYBOY2 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY3 starts sing_armsdown_loop_rear
&PARTYBOY1 starts sing_airguitar_neutral_loop
&PARTY 4 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
&PARTYBOY 5 starts talk_agree_happy
&PARTYGIRL2 starts dance_drop_it
&PARTYGIRL1 starts dance_shake_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL3 starts dance_grind_neutral_loop
&PARTYGIRL4 starts dance_club_happy_loop
&PARTYGIRL5 starts dance_groove_happy_loop
@BERLINDA changes into dress3_outfit
@GINA changes into Dress4_outfit
@STARR enters from left to screen left
@GINA enters from left to upscreen left
@BERLINDA enters from left to screen center
GINA (talk_agree_happy)
Now this is a party!

    BERLINDA (talk_excited_happy)
Yeah, Gina, Starr I'm so glad you decided to come.

    STARR (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Yeah, other wise I would be sulking.

    GINA (talk_excited_happy)
Enough talking lets start partying!

@GINA exits right AND GINA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop
@BERLINDA stands screen center AND BERLINDA faces left
BERLINDA (talk_shrug_concerned)
You coming Starr?

    STARR (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Nah, I think I'll have a drink first.

    BERLINDA (talk_shrug_neutral)
Alright, if you need I'll be on the dance floor!

@BERLINDA exits right AND BERLINDA starts run_athletic_neutral_loop
@STARR is deepbreath
@STARR exits left AND STARR starts walk_sad_loop
INT. BAR - NIGHT with BAR
@PATRICK stands screen center AND PATRICK faces left AND PATRICK moves to layer 0
@STARR enters from left to screen center AND STARR starts walk_sad_loop AND STARR moves to layer 1
&PATRICK starts tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear
}
“Go home and sulk” {
@STARR stands screen center
}
@STARR exits right

Okay so I removed the multiple choices in the outfit scene and put them all in one choice so there was no going back and forth between them, hope that’s okay! I had to remove the background characters so I hope I’ve put them all back correctly!

57%20PM

it worked but i keep getting this error

Is this script inside an if/elif/else or another choice? If so you just need to add an extra } on the end. It worked perfect on mine with no errors so that’s the only reason I can think of :see_no_evil:

okay.

nvm

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