Someone to review my first story

Can someone please review my story Scars, I need someone who can review and help with the flow of my story.
Its about a girl who is kidnapped and after getting away runs into a boy and father who helps her into hiding. Then she comes back 9 years later as a badass assassin working for the mafia who helped her hid in the first place, seeing the boy who saved her for the first time in 9 years.

Please DM if you interested in helping me.

1 Like

Ill try I guess, Is it ink or limelight?

1 Like

It seems cool and I definitly want to read it.Can I help?

1 Like