✨ R4R + REVIEWS (Complement | CC FANTASY STORY)

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#1

Hi everyone! :heart:

I am offering some R4R, and I will also give you a detailed review on your story as well. All that I ask for in return is to give my story a chance! If you read one episode, I will read one episode. If you read two episodes, I will read two episodes, etc.

So that I know that you are actually reading a chapter, please take a screen shot of the part in the end of each chapter that says "End of Chapter -insert chapter #-"

No screenshot, no deal, so please :slight_smile:

Here are the details of my story:

Title: Complement
Author: Amber Daisies
Genre: Fantasy/Suspense/Drama
Description: With Customizable Characters, Complement is about a guy and a girl who were destined to be together and defeat a great evil. Lucy is light, and Onyx is shade. Together, they can control all that is in creation. Lucy is not aware of her powers until she gets to university, where she learns about everything. Can Lucy and Onyx navigate each other in time to save the world?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5028671691423744

With love,
Amber Daisies :sunflower:


#2

Hi Amber,
I’d love to do a read for read. I can read 3 chapters by the end of the week, and of course, I will amke sure to include the screenshot you’ve requested.
Here are the details of my story:

Title: H & V: Lie to me
Author: Alexandra Mar
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Surez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664


#3

I’ll read! My story is called accidentally famous by Gabrielle :slight_smile: (with a smiley face)


#4

Hey there, I am interested in doing a read for read! I’ll send you screenshots as proof once I’m done :slight_smile:

Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past
Author: Zayen Ng
Description: Running from a secret organization that raised you as an assassin, how long could you hide before your past catches up to you? How far will things have to go before you kill again?
Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Action, Thriller, Romance, Mystery
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4909984744865792


#5

Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: Romance
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories
Episodes: 3
Questions: Story too long?
Is the plot interesting enough?
Should I allow readers to generate name/ create avatar
Is the story set up good for the reader to understand

If you have any questions comments concerns and most of all any advice about my story tell me honestly and respectful. I’m all ears thank you :two_hearts::stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:


#6

Hi ! I would love to check your story out! Please DM in instagram to share screenshots :smiley:
So here’s my story if you’re interesed in reading it! :slight_smile:
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 9 (complete)
Instagram: @oumniaepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5172961657356288


#7

I am going to read ur know and i will screech shot some of the scene and please check mine out

LINK


#9

Hey @amberdaisies
I read the first chapter of your story Complement it was pretty good no mistakes I didn’t have any major issues except the fact that the first chapter was pretty short which you assured readers that the next chapters will be longer. However I still feel like you should include a little more in the first episode to hook in the reader. Because I was so ready to see how her life was going to be like on campus but it already ended. Anyway good job and great story. :laughing:


#10

Hey!

Story - Hiding the truth
Author - ab.creates
Chapters out - 7
Description - Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?


#11

Hey there, I’ve read your story and sent you screenshots as proof! Do check your inbox :slight_smile:


#12

Thank you so much!! I was thinking the same thing. Hope you liked it and I will go ahead an read a chapter of yours as well <3


#13

Hey! So first I am going to answer the questions you had.

All based on Episode 1:

  1. Story too long?
    No, it’s short-medium length.
  2. Is the plot interesting enough?
    It’s different. I haven’t checked out the rest of the chapters, to know, but it seems very different from all other stories I’ve read.
  3. Should I allow readers to generate name/ create an avatar?
    Character Customization is always a plus, so if you can do it, then I 100% suggest it.

My review:
The story is very different from anything I’ve ever read, and I think it has a lot of potential. The main thing is that the grammar needs to be heavily edited because it is making it hard to understand what is going on in the story. There are also a few coding errors. For example, one of the characters was following another character, but he went the opposite way. When the episode first began, the MC wasn’t on the screen either, but he was talking. It was confusing. You just have to fine-tune everything, and then I think it’ll be great!


#14

Hi! When you send me the screenshots I’ll be sure to complete the R4R and review! Story looks good :heart:


#15

Hi! I will complete a R4R when you send me screenshots of how many chapters you’ve read :heart:


#16

Hi! Once you send me screenshots of how many chapters you’ve read, I’ll be happy to uphold my end of the R4R :slight_smile:


#17

Hi love! Just send me the screenshots of how many chapters you’ve read so I can go ahead and do the same for you and a review. :grin::heart:


#18

I will send you a screenshot when I finish reading.

Story- H&V: Our Story
Author- Ki_Writes
Genre- Action
Style- Ink
Description- When Ava’s younger sister goes missing, she must work with a group of superheros to save her.
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504


#19

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#20