I am offering some R4R, and I will also give you a detailed review on your story as well. All that I ask for in return is to give my story a chance! If you read one episode, I will read one episode. If you read two episodes, I will read two episodes, etc.
So that I know that you are actually reading a chapter, please take a screen shot of the part in the end of each chapter that says "End of Chapter -insert chapter #-"
No screenshot, no deal, so please
Here are the details of my story:
Title: Complement Author: Amber Daisies Genre: Fantasy/Suspense/Drama Description: With Customizable Characters, Complement is about a guy and a girl who were destined to be together and defeat a great evil. Lucy is light, and Onyx is shade. Together, they can control all that is in creation. Lucy is not aware of her powers until she gets to university, where she learns about everything. Can Lucy and Onyx navigate each other in time to save the world? Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5028671691423744
Hi Amber,
I’d love to do a read for read. I can read 3 chapters by the end of the week, and of course, I will amke sure to include the screenshot you’ve requested.
Here are the details of my story:
Title: H & V: Lie to me Author: Alexandra Mar Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Surez” no longer exists. Link:http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664
Hey there, I am interested in doing a read for read! I’ll send you screenshots as proof once I’m done
Title: H & V: Shadows of My Past
Author: Zayen Ng
Description: Running from a secret organization that raised you as an assassin, how long could you hide before your past catches up to you? How far will things have to go before you kill again?
Number of Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Genre: Action, Thriller, Romance, Mystery
Style: Ink
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4909984744865792
Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: Romance
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Published: yes
Instagram: Joqueena_stories
Episodes: 3
Questions: Story too long?
Is the plot interesting enough?
Should I allow readers to generate name/ create avatar
Is the story set up good for the reader to understand
If you have any questions comments concerns and most of all any advice about my story tell me honestly and respectful. I’m all ears thank you
Hi ! I would love to check your story out! Please DM in instagram to share screenshots
So here’s my story if you’re interesed in reading it!
Here’s my story:
Title: Girlhood
Author: Oumnia
Genre: Drama
Description: Kethius might seem like any ordinary teenage boy but in fact he hides a unique secret…
Number of Episodes: 9 (complete)
Instagram: @oumniaepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5172961657356288
Hey @amberdaisies
I read the first chapter of your story Complement it was pretty good no mistakes I didn’t have any major issues except the fact that the first chapter was pretty short which you assured readers that the next chapters will be longer. However I still feel like you should include a little more in the first episode to hook in the reader. Because I was so ready to see how her life was going to be like on campus but it already ended. Anyway good job and great story.
Story - Hiding the truth
Author - ab.creates
Chapters out - 7
Description - Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?
Hey! So first I am going to answer the questions you had.
All based on Episode 1:
Story too long? No, it’s short-medium length.
Is the plot interesting enough? It’s different. I haven’t checked out the rest of the chapters, to know, but it seems very different from all other stories I’ve read.
Should I allow readers to generate name/ create an avatar? Character Customization is always a plus, so if you can do it, then I 100% suggest it.
My review:
The story is very different from anything I’ve ever read, and I think it has a lot of potential. The main thing is that the grammar needs to be heavily edited because it is making it hard to understand what is going on in the story. There are also a few coding errors. For example, one of the characters was following another character, but he went the opposite way. When the episode first began, the MC wasn’t on the screen either, but he was talking. It was confusing. You just have to fine-tune everything, and then I think it’ll be great!
I will send you a screenshot when I finish reading.
Story- H&V: Our Story
Author- Ki_Writes
Genre- Action
Style- Ink
Description- When Ava’s younger sister goes missing, she must work with a group of superheros to save her.
Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4786197070741504
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