I’ve carefully read and analyzed all the advice given in the thread How does a story get noticed by the readers? and came to conclusion that my story is breaking all logical patterns. It contains almost all the components of success, mentioned in the thread, except the fact that nothing of this brougth this story any reader’s attention. The only advice I found working in my case are “be patient” and “keep writing”. And that’s why I’ll certainly finish this story. The description is given below. It would be great if someone gets interested and gives his feedback after reading my story. Maybe I’m missing something and you can help me to see it.
Tayra is a student archaelogist and she is obsessed with everything connected with ancient history. One day she goes on excursion to ancient city Tiamon. While overcoming a dark tunnel, Tayra mysteriously disappears. In a few hours a rescue team finds her and everything seems to be fine. But in a few days Tayra notices some weirdnesses in her body behavior. She finds herself absolutely insensitive to men caresses. After several vain attempts to solve the arisen problem Tayra is about to accept the fact of never feeling any excitement or pleasure again, when a mysterious intimidating stranger suddenly enters Tayra’s life… Insensitive before, Tayra feels undefeatable attraction to this man… And this attraction is getting stronger even despite the fact that Tayra’s mind is against this connection. Things get more complicated when Tayra finds the true love. How will Tayra cope with insensitivity and unwanted attraction? And will she get a chance to be happy with the man she loves?
Title: "Love or Desire"
Genre: Fantasy (but it also contains elements of Mystery and Romance)
Description: After a tragic incident during an excursion to ancient city Tiamon Tayra noticed some weirdnesses in her body behavior. Will this become an obstacle on her way to the true love?
Number of episodes: 15 (fully released)