Story chapter advice needed!

Hello! I’m working on my very first story and I’m not sure if what I have so far is strong enough for a first chapter. I’m at nearly 5.3k lines, but it still feels so short.
I’m looking for a few people (preferably experienced) to give my chapter a read and hoepfully give me some feedback after.

If you want to help, reply to this topic or dm me on here and I’ll provide the link for the story. :smile: thank you for your time!


Hi Boni!! ⸜(。˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝:heart: I’d love to test read it for you and let you know what I think! ⋅˚₊‧ ୨୧ ‧₊˚ ⋅ :blob_hearts:


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