Hello. I’m looking for feedback on my story description for my story From Riches to Rags.
Description: Forced into a terrible arranged marriage, Princess Elizabeth takes her fate into her own hands, and runs away from her destiny. With war looming ahead how will she fare on her own?
What do you think about it?
Is it intriguing?
Does it make you want to read the story?
Any tips to make it better?
Thank you 
