What do you think of this story description?
“When the pharmacy Wren works at gets robbed she tries to find the culprit, little does she know she just the crossed the line between good and bad. Rom-com ink”
Would you read?
What do you think of this story description?
“When the pharmacy Wren works at gets robbed she tries to find the culprit, little does she know she just the crossed the line between good and bad. Rom-com ink”
Would you read?
Do you mean the story description? Cause if so it sounds really good!
Ya sorry story description and tyyyyyy
If you have spare characters, add in puncutation.
I really liked the description hyped me up to read it, guess the punctuation needs a little change (my opinion, you don’t have to go through if you don’t want to )
When the pharmacy Wren works at gets robbed, she tries to find the culprit. Little does she know she would cross the line between good and bad. Rom-com ink
Either ways, I liked the idea and the description
No problem!
Also I think there should be a comma after robbed and the comma after culprit should be a period
Awwwwww ty and will do
No problem happy to help
Ok ty
There are some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid them to avoid misunderstandings. I would rewrite that as the following: When the pharmacy Wren works at gets robbed, she tries to find the culprit. Little does she know, she just the crossed the line between good and bad. (Rom-com & ink)
Sounds good though! Happy writing!
That sounds really good, I would recommend that too!
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