Story Description Help Please

Hi guys,
I need help condescending my story description into the 180 characters Episode has and I want it to be compelling:

Natalie Davis swapped saving the planet for the glamour of Hollywood. But when a very public breakup reveals cracks in her not-so-perfect life, she heads home to reassess what she wants. Unfortunately, Turnberry has some problems of its own - including the first man to break her heart.

How about =

a) After swapping heroism for Hollywood, cracks start to surface in her not-so-perfect life. Making the decision to head home could be life changing. Is that a good thing?

I may return with more options if I remember (:

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