Story description help?

Description: Mc mom gets in a terrible car accident which leaves mc in foster care until she gets adopted and meets two brother who try to steal her heart

Does this sound good or add more???

It sounds good but maybe try to clean it up a bit.

Like this:

When your mom gets into a fatal car accident, you’re left to foster care in tears. Until you’re adopted and meet two brothers. Who will steal your heart?


Thanks :pray:

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No problem!

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Solved and closed. Thanks all!

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