Story description review need. Opinions

So,I have a new story description. Thanks to @AMagic!

Description:
Unstoppable sisters that can see the future, sounds pretty cool. But when they’re considered supernatural freaks to the world. Everything changes, can they be stopped?
Does this sound interesting to you? Would you read it?

  • Yes
  • No
  • A little

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@amberose @AMagic @superb @Kaitie @JulesM.episode @Elaina.p

Sounds good just need to edit it. But when your- your should be they’re.
Also sentence structure maybe say- Unstoppable sisters that can see the future, sounds pretty cool right? But when they’re supernatural freaks to the world, everything changes. Can they be stopped?

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Can ya vote please?

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