Story feedback <3

I’ve started a story called Facing my past, at the moment there is only a few episodes out so I would love to hear what people think I can improve on before publishing any new episodes, this would be a massive help! You can either leave feedback on here or DM me on Instagram @episode.trinity

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I Can give a rewiew its usally just my thoughts while Reading just send me the link

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http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5119499474632704

Thank you so much!

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Are you interested in R4R?

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Yeah of course

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Here is my story :slight_smile:

Hi R4R?

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Sure, link me yours. I’ll send screens

Hii would you like to do R4R with me ?
Here’s the story info
Story : LOVE IN DIFFERENT LAYERS
Author : Apriliazeva
Story kind : Limelight
Genre : Romance, Comedy
Episode : 5
Story Description : popular and spoiled- you don’t know how not to get your ways. When he enters your life you’re everything he hates, will hate lead to love?
Extras : FULL CC / Art scenes / Choices Matter
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5171300949360640

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Sure :slight_smile:
Here is my link:

Okayyyy I’ll read now :blush:

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I was mesmerized by how you made the phone call scene as well as the one with the tv. I like the fact that you can have a recap and Giselle is quirky and this really shows in the pillow fight :slight_smile:

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Hi here’s the proof, it’s such a funny story. I love the plot and MC funny minds. I know that I’m a new author as well But
can I give you some feedback?

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Thank youu :two_hearts::two_hearts::two_hearts::slight_smile::slight_smile::slight_smile:

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Ofc you can!

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About spot coding, it’s better than the girl is a little bit smaller not the same height as the boys

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I’ll take it into consideration, ty for the tip.

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