If you have a story i will read and support it and give you feedback and maybe some tips if theyโre needed. Just drop your story. I feel like reading new stories
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Would be nice to get feedback on my story!
Title:
Cry Me an Ocean
Genre:
Fantasy
Episodes:
3 (soon 4)
Other:
Link:
OMG IT LOOKS SO GOOD THO! Who did your cover art? But iโm on it right now!!
Thx!
@/versearrow did the cover!
I just read the first episode and i donโt see how you have under 10 viewsโฆ YOUR DIRECTING IS GOOD . i liked how she was in the hospital bed and it looked like her eyes were opening and closing, might need you to teach me how to do that but other then that just keep writing because i think it can be really great! maybe one thing i would work on is the wolf transition, i would make it a little more cleaner instead of it just popping up on my screen like that.
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Iโll try to make the wolf transformation a bit cleaner!
And thank you!
Iโll teach you how to do the eye thing
(Just DM me 
)
Sadly I have no idea how to make it look clean XD Iโll read some topics and see if any of them explain how XD
Hi 
I would love to get some feedback!
Title : Craving For The Risk
Genre : Romance (with a lot of drama)
Style : Limelight
MC : Female
Description : The second Ruby and Carterโs worlds colliede he turnes her life up side downโฆ Could he be the risk she craves for? Or will he be her downfall?
The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Craving For The Risk
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Includes :
CC (MC + family and LI)
Point system
Author : MyEpisodees
Instagram : myepisodees
Hello! Hope youโre doing fine! 
If you wanna see or learn more about my story, you can check out my Instagram. 
Here is my story. 
Title: ๐ธ๐ ๐น๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐.
Author: Sonder. 
Instagram: @sonder.author
Genre: Drama, Romance
Style: Limelight
Story Description: ๐๐๐๐ก ๐ค๐๐ก๐ฉ ๐ฟ๐๐๐๐ ๐
๐๐๐ ๐ก๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ก๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ข๐ ๐
๐๐๐๐. ๐ฟ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐ก๐ฉ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ข๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ฟ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ค๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก ๐๐๐๐ก๐ฆ ๐ก๐ฉ๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐๐ก. ๐ด๐๐ ๐ก๐ฉ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ฉ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ก. (๐ฟ๐ฟ) ๐ถ๐ฉ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐ก๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ฉ๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐ก. (๐ผ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ค๐๐ก๐ฉ ๐๐ข๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ฃ๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐ก๐ ๐ข๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ก๐๐.)
๐ณ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐บ ๐๐๐๐บ๐ ๐๐๐ป๐๐๐พ๐ / ๐๐บ๐ฟ๐๐บ / ๐๐บ๐๐๐๐๐พ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐. ๐ณ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐พ ๐ ๐๐๐พ ๐บ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐บ๐ป๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ผ๐บ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ผ๐๐บ๐๐บ๐ผ๐๐พ๐๐ ๐ผ๐บ๐ ๐ฟ๐บ๐ ๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐พ ๐พ๐บ๐ผ๐ ๐๐๐๐พ๐ ๐บ๐๐ฝ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐พ๐๐ ๐๐พ๐ ๐บ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.
๐๐ต๐ผ๐ถ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ถ๐น๐น ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐บ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐ถ๐ ๐ฎ ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ถ๐ป๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ฒ๐บ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐ฐ๐ต ๐๐ถ๐น๐น ๐ฐ๐ต๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐ต ๐๐ผ๐โ๐น๐น ๐๐ฎ๐น๐ธ.
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4728753642864640
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Hi! Iโd like some feedback:)
Title : Twelve
Author : Molly & Thea
Genre : Comedy and Romance
Chapters : 3 and more coming soonโฆ
Description : Ah yes, December, Christmas time, but also the perfect time to ask for forgiveness. Join Cody, a former playboy, on his journey to seek forgiveness from his former high school classmates.
Includes:
- Full CC
- Male MC
- Point System
- Advanced Directing
- Important Choices
- Two Endings
Link: https://episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5600412467134464
Instagram: @kennedymolly97
Hello @Kendallbres! I would also love to hear what you think of my story!
I hope to hear from you very soon! 
Hi, you could check out my story if you want
Author : Simi.a
Title : Apply pressure
Genre : Romance
Style : limelight
Instagram : Simi.a.stories
Description : A strong-willed engineer. A billionaire CEO. Theyโre both fighting for what they canโt have. Can they beat the odds stacked against them? or will the pressure crush them both?
The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: Dying For You
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Annie led a busy life as a loved pop star. Little did she realise that she was about to be dragged into a nightmare, the likes of which could not have entered her wildest dreams!
Hope you like it! And if you think itโs worth itโฆpass it through!
Tell me your opinions.
I read the first two episodes and i have to say that you did not lie about the advanced directing, you must be really experienced. and second I LIKE HOW DETAILED IT IS. i caught how after the glitched they actually started to feel human emotions and i liked how you put that together and iโm going to keep reading. The advanced directing makes me want to read it more and i like how after every episode you can chose if you want to customize again because sometimes i dislike how you can only customize once. But good job i feel like this will be successful.
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Thanks for the feedback! Iโm glad you like it
Story name:
High on Love and Formaldehyde aka HOLAF
AUTHOR: Liz & Mar
GENRE: Romance/Drama
Chapters So Far: 19 (update every other Wednesday)
STYLE: Limelight
Extra details
2 LI (full cc)
MC (limited cc)
art scenes
mature
slow burn.
point system
choices matter
IG: @ liz_mar.episode
DESCRIPTION: Working at a morgue is what Eliana loves but when her life gets darker than her job, sheโll need all the support she can get. Whoโll bring back the light in the dark?
CC, LL, Art
MATURE CONTENT
**Song recommendations to play while reading certain scenes are shown throughout the story **
Story Link
Personal link including playlist
Iโm always up for any kind of feedback 
Instagram: @epi.sam.writes
Title: The Art of Criminal Profiling
Genre: Mystery
Style: Limelight
Chapters: 7 and 8 out now (more coming soon)
Description:
Can Valentina, a successful FBI agent, decode a series of bone chilling mysteries before itโs too late? If not, she may just lose everything and everyone she cares about.
Customization:
Full customization
Choices:
There are numerous point systems with choices that matter.
Mini games and sound are incorporated into the story.
Hope you enjoy 
The Best Stories Are Worth Sharing: The Art of Criminal Profiling
Title: All United
Author: Laura
Instagram: @_laura_episode
Genre: Mystery/Drama
Episodes: 6 (more comingโฆ)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5955812923211776
You can take screenshots and DM it to me.
Thank you! Your feedback on my story would mean a lot to me 
Title: Treasure In You
Author: L.Q. Walter
Instagram: @lqwalter.episode
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Chapters: 6 (more coming soon)
Style: Limelight
Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a guy who is downright cocky yet wickedly hot!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896
Cover:
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Thank you for the thread
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This is my story
Title : Long time
Gerne: Romance / Mystery
Episodes: 3 (ongoing)
Author: Lea
Instagram: lea.episode.1
Description: Hanna grew up in one of the most Dangerous Italian Mafia families.
Since her mum died from unknown circumstances she feels like a piece of herself is missing.
What happens when you feel like you donโt fit in this world anymoreโฆ and you want to know the truth?
When you cross his path will he help you?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5057764931076096
Cover:
