Story feedback for new authors (first episode only)

Title: Thrill of the Hunt
Author: azariasin on the app, or Azaria Sin is my pen name
Genre: Murder-mystery, though it has plenty thriller and comedic elements.

Description: To find a serial killer hunting innocent women, you’re paired with someone unexpected! Will you navigate lust, betrayal and tragedy in this murder-mystery? CC! [MATURE]

It has plenty CC, and is in INK style.

Hey, I was wondering if you would be willing to review what I have of the first episode from my unpublished story? It’s around the first 12 minutes of it, so it shouldn’t be terribly short :sweat_smile:

Take all the time you need :sparkling_heart:

Name: Providence
Author: A.D. Summers
Genre: Fantasy Adventure
Number of episodes: 1 (ignore the second I was messing around with something lol)
Description: “Why does God even deal with us?” I never thought I’d know his answer, until I went to that mysterious town. After all, Providence is a greater mystery than Revelation. Limited CC (??? still debating)

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I would love if you reviewed my story!

I’d like you to review my story :heart:
Authors name: Anna

Hello @S.Lovex! I would love it you would try my story. You are very welcome to give me comments and feedbacks! :blush:

Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance w/ a touch of Fantasy (but i put it in the fantasy section)
Episodes: 5 ongoing
IG: @authorlou.episode

Tittle: Search for love.
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Story Description :Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Genre: Drama
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