Story Feedback needed on First Story

#1

Hey everyone,

I’m having a bit of writers block and an hoping to get feedback on my story to help me finish it. My story is called “The Light” by NikkiV

I’m haven’t gotten a lot of feedback from reader messages so I don’t know if the story is going good so far or if I need to vamp it up.

Please if you can give it a read and let me know what you think. Thanks in advance

#2

I would love to give you some feedback on it, but I can’t seem to find it. Could you try linking it?

#4

Moved to the Share Feedback section! :v:t2:

#6

Thank you. I appreciate this. The link is

I’m reading The Light (Chapter 13 is HERE!!!). Check it out: https://episode.app.link/D06YNPfh6K

#7

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:

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