Story Feedback Needed: Orphan Black

I am writing a story based on the T.V. series, Orphan Black. I’d appreciate feedback from readers familiar and unfamiliar with the show. Reply if interested. One episode completed, (rough draft).
Thank you!

That might not be within the content guidelines. I’d recommend you check.

Yeah, you would have to make sure there were no copyright issues. Is it like the the show or loosely based?