Hiya, so I’ve recently started my first Episode story.
Like a total idiot, I didn’t really develop my plot or really choose a direction for it to go before starting.
I just want to discuss back and forth with someone about the story and different directions to take the plot, my character design, the story title, etc. So, basically, I want feedback on every aspect of my story.
Here’s some basic info:
GENRE: Comedy (the intended audience being teenagers)
This is Blair, a 23-year-old bisexual female. She is a multiracial Brazilian with her specific background being up to the reader. She is going to be Semi-Customizable. Blair is also the main character.
This is Charisma, a friend of Blair’s. Most of the details for her haven’t been worked out.
PROGRESS: about 130 lines
The plot is based on Blair starting work as an assistant to the Editor in Chief of Verse magazine.
That’s a link to the current story.
So, hopefully, you guys have some good feedback.