Story Grammar Reviews

Hey there!
I’ve created this thread to help people who might be struggling with adding proper Grammar to their story.
English is my first language, and I would be happy to help anyone.:heartpulse:

Form to fill out.
  1. Episode username
  2. Instagram username( if you have one)
  3. Title of your story.
  4. A link to your story
Waiting list.

@artemis37
@caitealatte
@riangelic
@episode_elisastory

Stories I've reviewed

Call of duty by @episode_katherinee
Throw the Dice by @Maria_R
Forbidden Love by @LiliStar
An unpublished story by @Rosenspitze

Credit is appreciated, of course.:two_hearts:

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Hi @_LC!

Thanks for creating this thread and offer to help us! I would love to get a grammar review from you!

Episode username: @episode_katherinee
Instagram username: @episode_katherinee
Title of the story: Call of Duty
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5281177222316032

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You’re welcome!:heartbeat:
I’ll start reviewing your story now.

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Thank you so much! :heartpulse:

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Episode 1

  • Aaron: I’ve never worn a flannel shirt before.

  • Aaron: Well, I’ve got a thing in mind…

  • Aaron: How did we end up here, you may ask…

  • Reader Message Nine months earlier…

  • Aaron: I’ve got to take time to make this look good, right?

  • Matt: Sorry, I’ve got hiccups.

  • Isabella: Quiet down, or we’ll get caught!

  • Darnell: What were you and Matt doing?!

  • Darnell: Not to get him into a car crash!

  • Isabella: We were following him!

  • Aaron: If it wasn’t for me, you wouldn’t have been able to catch him.

  • Author: May you show me your coupon, so you can collect the cake?

Loved that cake scene. :smirk:

  • Aaron: We’ve been here for half an hour now. Who are we waiting on?

Bonus scene:
Isabella: Who am I kidding, I’m eating this cake first!

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I would love to get a review from you! Thank you so much for doing this! :blob_hearts:

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EPISODE 2

Aaron: Seriously, John?!
Aaron: Have you even thought this through?!
Aaron: This place only has a three star rating!
Isabella: I have priorities.
John: Not exactly sure what you meant by “Aiya” Ay, you two! Stop arguing!
Aaron: This one’s ok, I think.
Isabella: A random white dress will be fine, right?
Aaron: Sounds good to me, I’ll do anything to not face her.
Isabella: I can’t come home and see you guys as often as I do now…
Liam: For how long are you going to be in the training camp for?
Isabella: I hope it’s not for long…
Liam: I wouldn’t dare to interfere with Isabella’s work.
Liam: Excuse me, I’m going to the bathroom.
Tomas: Are you going undercover??
John: Now, before you to get out of the car-
Isabella: Do you know which lift takes us to level 2?
Angie: Oh! The one on your right.

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I would love to review your story, I’ll start once I’m done with @/ episode_katherinee’s. :heavy_heart_exclamation:

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Thanks! Take your time :blob_hearts:

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EPISODE 3

Aaron: Didn’t we take this picture back to back?! Why is this one face to face?!
Isabella: I hate to admit it, but I’m impressed.
Isabella: With the wedding background and everything else…it makes everything look so real.
John: Go ahead and press the red button on the menu!
John: This can only be accessed through this phone, so keep this with you at all times.
Aaron: What did our door ever do to you?
Aaron: I would have died of suffocation if I didn’t turn on the fan.
Aaron: So how are you planning on doing that?

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This is just what I needed! Thank you for this :star_struck:

Episode username: Lili Star
Instagram username: @lili_on_episode
Title of my story: Forbidden Love
Link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4671279079948288

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I’ll be reviewing your story soon. :two_hearts:

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Thank you so much for checking my grammar! I’ll definitely go back and check them all again! :heartpulse:

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You’re very welcome, good luck with your story! :two_hearts:
Really loved it so far. :wink:

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Omg you’re a champ! I’m so glad you like it! I really appreciate your help! Thanks again!

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@Maria_R Grammar Review for “Throw the Dice”

Episode 1
Luna: Home sweet home.
Luna: You can go help my aunt instead.
Audrey: Luna, go get ready for lunch!
Luna: I’ll be there in twenty minutes!
Cornelius: Of course I do Miss.
Audrey: Luna, come here right now!
Luna: Oh oh!
Audrey: He works for us.
Vivian: Are we supposed to act different somehow?
ReaderMessage Later that night…
Vivian: Leaving home makes me like we’re abandoning all our memories with them.
Audrey: Where’s the secure and confident Audrey that people know?
NARRATOR: After a well deserved rest…
Charlotte: Hey guys, listen!
Fiona: Chill out, love.
Fiona: You weren’t the one being told to welcome them and guide them throughout the school like I was.

EPISODE 2

Luna: Blue…!
Luna: I love you so much, Viv.
Fiona: There it is.
Fiona: See you, never!
Luna: Earrings…tattoos…torn jeans…
Stella: Listen to me, idiot!
Stella: I’m the one who rules this place!
Sarah: Stella just thinks she’s the best thing in the world.
Luna: How did you manage to make her go away?
Sarah: She doesn’t belong with the “losers.”
Luna: Is it possible for you to lend me your phone, for a minute?
Luna: Hey Viv, it’s me, Luna!
Luna This is the boy Sarah told me about!
Charlotte: Do you just always wear one of those stupid Barbie dresses?!
Henry: Has she ever done anything to you?
Charlotte: Henry, protecting Luna!
Liam: Or, you can go with someone else…
Vivian: I do have more clothes, but it’s getting late.

EPISODE 3

Vivian: Really?!
Vivian: Do whatever you want Luna!
Luna: You.
Liam: You sure you don’t?
Luna: You’re going to regret that.

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Thank you so much! Should I give you credit somewhere?

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You can credit me by my Instagram, if you’d like. :two_hearts:
@.epy.lc

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Of course! Thank you again :relaxed:

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