You’re welcome, good luck with your story. 
Hello…thank you so much… I’d appreciate a review from you 
Episode username: Artemis
Instagram: artemis.episodee
Story: Mia
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4514366554505216
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If that isn’t too much 
I’ll really appreciate it though!
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Sure, it might take a little bit longer, but I’m open to review all eleven episodes.
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I’ll get started after I’m done with @/LiliStar’s review.
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Sure, understandable! Thank you so much
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“Forbidden Love” by @LiliStar
EPISODE 1:
Amanda: That life that every little girl dreams of.
Amanda: Otherwise her parent(s), the whole kingdom will be disappointed in her.
Amanda: I would know…
Amanda: I’m a princess myself, living with my brother and mother in the kingdom Sanara.
Young Maria: A prince that every princess would want to marry in the future.
Amanda: My mother didn’t enforce strict rules for me and my brother.
Young Maria: I’m not even sure how this movie passed all the reviews.
Young Maria: It’s how the human race was created, sweetie.
Amanda: The guests have arrived!
Robert: We’re from the Kingdom, Minou.
Vanessa: WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?!
Roberto: You’re going to be meeting up with Roberto, so you can get to know each other.
Amanda: Guess this one of my last nights of sleep, alone.
EPISODE 3
Mandy: Good morning, and a very big welcome to you all in my wedding boutique.
Vanessa: Did you have fun at the wedding shopping for your wedding dress?
Vanessa: Whatever you say, Amanda…
Amanda: I’m blushing, aren’t I?
Amanda: It’s making me extremely nervous for some reason?
Vanessa: I love taking photos of special mementos of people.
Vanessa: Cliché romcom scene part two.
Amanda: Should I take you back home?
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Yessss, thank you 
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EPISODE 4
Roberto: Sis, you honestly have a beautiful voice.
Roberto: I have a question, and you must answer honestly.
Roberto: My lovely sister wouldn’t betray me like that.
Vanessa: Of course I wouldn’t betray you Roberto. I do love you.
Roberto: Well, I’ll be off now, bye!
Amanda: It’s a beautiful sight, a calming place with a delightful smell attached to it.
Judy: Do something with your time, Amanda. you weren’t born to just sit around.
Amanda: Stop being sad, call her.
Vanessa: I already knew that.
Vanessa: Did you hear that.
Vanessa: Those footsteps my friend, aren’t normal footsteps. Those are the DEVIL’S footsteps.
Amanda: Hold on, my mom just sent me a message.
EPISODE 5
Maria: Don’t you have a date in twenty- five minutes?
Amanda: I lost track of time while I was talking to Vanessa.
Jennifer: My mother was going insane because of my father’s death, and always blamed me for his passing.
Young Roberto: Shh, I know. I miss him too.
Young Roberto: But Vanessa, Dad is watching over us, always.
Vanessa: And I have to be with them and see everything.
Iris: Sh, it’s okay
Amanda: Don’t worry Roberto, I’m being honest, I love it.
Roberto: Who are your favourite artists?
Amanda: He’s very protective over the ones he truly loves.
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Hello,
thank you for this thread! I don’t have anyone to proof read my story and so much coding overwhelms me which I think affect some of the dialogues I created. I hope you can help me.
Thank you.
- Episode username - caitealatte
- Instagram username( if you have one) - @epi.caitealatte
- Title of your story. - The Difference
- A link to your story - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6630581209333760
This means a lot. Thank you! <3
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I’ll add you to the waiting list.
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thank you very very much! 
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EPISODE 6
Amanda: My brother got in a car accident, Roberto! We have to go to the hospital.
Amanda: Do you have any clothes I could wear?
Amanda: What’s his chance of survival?
Zoey: He’s in a critical state, but we’re trying our best.
Amanda: If we are successful, he will have a good chance of survival.
Amanda: The surgery was successful!
Amanda: Mikey has better chance of survival now!
Mike: Don’t cry sis, I’m right here, already feeling better!
Mike: God! Another subject please, I feel sick.
Amanda: Yeah, something’s hurting me.
EPISODE 7
Amanda: That’s one special way to greet someone.
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EPISODE 8
Little thing, I just noticed the splash in the beginning is grammatically incorrect.
“Turn up your volume! This story contains music and sound.”
Sophie: Good morning all and welcome to your favourite morning show, Morning Sunshine.
Sophie: Hosted by your favourite host, me!
Reporter: I’m standing here with the lovely royal couple.
Amanda: So I immediately went to Roberto the amazing news!
Reporter: Two weeks? Will everything be planned by then?!
Reporter: As you can see, this royal couple cannot wait for their wedding.
Sophie: The baby clothes thief is back in town…
Amanda: I didn’t know I was so good at acting.
Vanessa: I have this sudden urge to go…
Amanda: Couldn’t you just ask normally?
Amanda - How does she look was the question, was the question.
Amanda: Her upbeat personality, her humor. Always puts a smile on my face.
Amanda: She’s the reason why I learned to enjoy life to the fullest.
Vanessa: Go try it on! I laid it on the chair in the dressing room.
Jennifer: We’ll see you at the wedding, Amanda dear!
Priest: Welcome, everyone. We are here on this beautiful day, to wed the princess Amanda and prince Roberto.
Amanda: All I could think about, was Vanessa.
EPISODE 9
Glory: Did you finally steal a bride, like you always wanted to do! Ever since you saw the ‘I Write Sins, Not Tragedies’ music video, from Panic at the Disco?!
Glory: YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO MARRY PRINCE ROBERTO, VANESSA’S BROTHER!
Glory: I shipped you both, since day one, my love.
Glory: I’ll just throw Frank out of the house.
Vanessa: We would just like our own place to stay in, please.
Glory: Well, alright then! I’ll see what I can do for the both of you.
Vanessa: Well, next to my gorgeous princess.
Maria: THEY HAD THE NERVE TO DO THIS ON THE WEDDING DAY?!
Roberto: MOTHER! Use our best spies to track them down!
Glory: I wanna be so damn cliché, let’s scare them.
Amanda: I’m sorry if I’m being a bit too straight forward, but are you Frank?
Glory: To help you begin your new life, I left some money in the house so you can buy food an other things.
Amanda: How in the world did you arrange all of that?!
Vanessa: She gave THIS to us, for free?!
Amanda: First, I was at my wedding, ready to marry Roberto.
Vanessa: WAKE UP, WE’RE GOING SHOPPINGGG!
Vanessa: Oh, you drama queen!
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EPISODE 10
Amanda: By chance, do you know where my other wig is?
Maria: HOW DO YOU HAVE THE NERVE TO MANIPULATE MY DAUGHTER AND MAKE HER LESIBIAN?!!
Amanda: That was three weeks ago…sigh
Joyce: A shame you don’t have that girlfriend of yours anymore. She could have helped you go through it.
Amanda - A wave of sadness overcame my whole body.
It hurts…god. Everything hurts so bad, I wanted to breakdown right there.
Britt: I’m sorry, that my mom brought it up.
Britt: Roberto told me what happened through a text message.
Amanda- I felt so safe and…l-loved…?
Amanda- Like there’s finally someone who actually cares.
Amanda: Is it just me, or…
Amanda: Did you bring Roberto here, too?
Britt: She always brought me here and told me so many stories about my grandfather and herself.
Rose: Vanessa, sweetie?
Jennifer: Being able to talk to you is enough to make me happy.
Vanessa: We all wouldn’t have been in this mess!
Jennifer: Caring about him? Yeah, maybe.
Amanda: You consider me a friend, already…?
Amanda: Vanessa said the same thing actually.
Amanda: I’ve never sang in public.
Britt: Who said we’re singing in public?
Amanda: Wait, did you rent the whole bar?
Amanda - An ice cold look, great
Maria: I had my talk with Roberto, so my work here is done.
Vanessa: I could talk to people and make some new friends.
Vanessa - I’ve heard she lashes at people suddenly, so nope.
Vanessa- She’s a bit…scary…
Vanessa: Who do they think they are, telling all of us that we aren’t allowed to love somebody of the same gender?!
Vanessa: We’ve done nothing wrong! Putting people in a mental hospital, because they think they can cure homosexuality!
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EPISODE 11
Roberto: I’m that scary, huh?
Amanda: May I ask you something?
Roberto: She wanted to ask how things were going.
Roberto: I think she just wants to have a talk with you, honestly. Maybe spend the day with you as well.
Amanda - I can’t…help but feel nervous. So damn nervous about tomorrow.
Amanda: Don’t you miss your little sister, hm?
Amanda: I-…fell in love with a girl Mikey. Ugh, it was…pretty stupid of me…?
Amanda: I know, I know it’s forbidden.
Maria: Remember the park where I brought you guys to when you were younger?
Maria: Of course, just like old times dear.
Vanessa: May I ask how long you’ve been stuck in here…?
Amanda: I sure am, mother!
Amanda: It all feels so nostalgic…
Amanda: PLEASE, explain TO ME why we can’t just be OURSELVES?!
Dawn: The most important reason for many people, is that God says no.
Britt: Oh, Glory. Where have you been for my entire life?
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MIA by @artemis37 - EPISODE 1
- Narrator bubble mistake: This story uses sound.
Narrator: Big city…so many opportunities…
Narrator: For me, it was the only solution to my…situation.
Narrator: I never craved for so many things in my life… all I really wanted, was a simple and happy family.
Narrator : But you really don’t know what the future holds…
Mia - What horrible thing did I do to deserve this?
Mia - Why would such cruel, awful people get let into my life?
Mia - Why was I so damn naïve, always wanted to see the good in so many devil eyes?
Mia - My life wasn’t always like this.
Mia- We weren’t rich, but we had what we needed to survive.
Mia - She lives with us.
Mia - He loves her and treats her like his second daughter.
James: You always looking stunning, but tonight you’re just…
James: Let’s go somewhere quieter, babe.
James: Please, promise me. You’ll love me forever, no matter what… and… you’re never gonna break up with me, never,
Jenny: Why. Why are you talking to me like that James.
Jenny: You might think it’s a mistake! But James! For me it was right, it all felt so damn right.
Jenny - Let’s see how your precious girlfriend will forgive after this.
Charles: Continue to be the amazing person you are, no matter what life throws at you.
James: She was crying?!
Jenny: She saw us. Me and James.
Kate: What did she see?
Mia: I just see Jenny laughing, so damn happy. It hurts. It hurts so much…
Mia: My dad was just in a car accident.
Mia - Days passed by and I gave up on keeping track of time.
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YOU ARE THE BEST… thank you so much for doing this…
do you have Instagram so I can credit you???
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