Hello, my name is Nessa and I published my first story on the app called Miss Mafia. I was looking at the intro I made when I was first writing the first episode and now that I look back at it, I realized it’s very plain and unoriginal. So with your guys help, could you give me some ideas?
The story is about a mafia, obviously, and a bit of magic. The main character is Valentina, a 22 year old living in Vienna, Austria. Valentina has powers. There is also Declan, a 24 year old and he also has powers.
Make sure to have transition at the beginning of your intro.
If your story contains strong language etc… You can create a background yourself with a text, I think it’s even better than when you just choose the one that Episode have made.
If your story uses sounds and music, let the reader know by using a background as well and not the NARRATOR bubbles. It’s more original.
Don’t make your intro last forever, if you want it to appear in each episode, I think it has to be good and short, not too long because it can be annoying.
If you are using different backgrounds in your intro make sure to use transitions between each backgrounds, makes it cooler!
And finally, don’t forget to do a @transition fade out [color] number. And maybe open your first scene with a transition as well…
That’s what I do, maybe it will make your intro much better
