Story Outline Opinion!

okay, guys, My story that I am currently writing on is called “Love shot”. Here’s the outline on it… Let me know what u guys think about it and i would love some suggestions. Remember its just an outline. A story with the female as badass and the Li as innocent.

Story Outline:

Razira is the head of the most feared gang in her country, Pulo. She inherited it from her father and has been doing a good job of maintaining it for three years.
Everything goes smooth until her dad’s death arises the confidence to take them down to her enemies. Her own love, Nigel, gets killed by her due to this. All of her life she lived before that was fake and full of lies which made her a cold-hearted demon who is not afraid to kill.

After Nigel’s death, she was heartbroken and needed something to distract herself. She’s an excellent bike racer so she organised a success party in her bikers arena. There comes an unwanted visitor who is a biker himself, who had no idea on what’s going on her crazy world.

Unfortunately, he gets caught in it and she feels that he is too innocent to survive her world and feels the need to protect him for some reason but what if he was the solution to her problems? What if he could be the one to mend back a broken heart? Will, he let her in because monsters like her tend to break in and consume one’s heart very easily leaving a huge scar when they leave?

Final question is, Is Kai ready to dance with the demon herself? Careful what you wish for Kai, A love shot can be really suffocating…

Share your opinions below and leave a like if you like the outline! Follow me on @epi.enchantress for more!

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bump!

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I like it!

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thanks lana! trying something different with my stories lol!

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It sounds really cool! I love the badass female Mc stories as a whole so I can’t wait to see how this turns out for you.

I love the LI’s name lol

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haha true tysm! iam still working on it! if u have ig, u can follow me on @epi.enchantress for updates

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