Story Review For A Newbie Author?

So I created and published my first story on episode two months ago and since then I’ve been really curious to see what people think of it. I’m nervous to hear someone else’s opinion on it but I’m open to any criticism you might have. Please PM if you’re open to doing this, thanks :blob_sun:

Link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6051125611659264

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I can do a rewiew, but I am brutally honest and will point out evry mistake I see.

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I can try later

I’d love to do read 4 read with you :purple_heart:

Can you please read my story I want honest opinion !

Here’s the link for my story

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I can do the rewiew but I cant PM, you have your profile private, can I pm you on insta,

I don’t have Instagram so wait I will make my profile public.

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Done!

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