Story review; Queen Z


I recently started my first story and I would like feedback. It’s a thriller story about a girl struggling to live as a zombie and handle a normal life. It has 4 chapters but you can only review the first chapter if you want. Hopefully you guys will enjoy it.

Want a first episode criticism? [CLOSED]

I really like your story :laughing::smiley::smiley:


Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. Did you notice any errors or things you didn’t like in the story?